List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then add specific details. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list using a mobile app rather than writing on paper. For example, my mother often instructs me to include groceries and stationery items that we need to buy from the supermarket.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Respond directly to the question, then explain with relevant examples. Use correct grammar and linking words to improve flow.

Ví dụ: No, I usually do not make lists for my work. For instance, when I worked on a software design project in college, I preferred to search for information instantly online rather than preparing a list beforehand.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Provide a clear opinion with reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it weakens their memory. They prefer to remember things by repeating them mentally, which helps train their memory skills.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant information. Give a direct answer, explain your preference clearly, and avoid unnecessary details. Use linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone using mobile apps because it is convenient. Sometimes, I even send the list to myself via WhatsApp to keep track of the items easily.

× Yes, I usually create notes with the help of mobile app, not paper based writing or anything like that.

✓ Yes, I usually create notes with the help of a mobile app, not paper-based writing or anything like that.

The phrase 'with the help of mobile app' is missing the article 'a' before 'mobile app'. Also, 'paper based' should be hyphenated as 'paper-based' when used as an adjective. Articles and hyphenation are important for clarity and correctness in English.

× My mother gives me instructions to write the list about the grocery so stationaries which need to be buy from the supermarket by writing this.

✓ My mother gives me instructions to write the list about the groceries and stationeries which need to be bought from the supermarket by writing this.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun and noun usage. 'Grocery' should be plural 'groceries' to refer to multiple items. 'Stationaries' should be 'stationeries'. The phrase 'need to be buy' should be 'need to be bought' (past participle). Also, 'by writing this' is unclear but retained as per original. Correct noun forms and verb participles are necessary for grammatical accuracy.

× No, I don't create any list when I do some works.

✓ No, I don't create any list when I do some work.

The word 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun when referring to tasks or activities. Using 'work' instead of 'works' is grammatically correct in this context.

× For example when I was working on a project while I was studying in my college, I create at instant like designing a software where the product size search online at that instant only.

✓ For example, when I was working on a project while I was studying in my college, I created it instantly, like designing software where I searched for the product size online at that instant only.

The verbs 'create' and 'search' should be in past tense 'created' and 'searched' to match the past context indicated by 'was working' and 'was studying'. Also, 'at instant' is corrected to 'instantly' for proper adverb usage. Correct tense consistency is essential for clarity.

× I don't have any hobby to create.

✓ I don't have any hobby of creating.

The phrase 'hobby to create' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'hobby of creating' to indicate an activity one enjoys. Using the gerund form after 'hobby of' is grammatically correct.

× Maybe because they feels that making least affect their memory.

✓ Maybe because they feel that making lists affects their memory.

The subject 'they' requires the verb 'feel' without 's'. Also, 'making least' should be 'making lists'. The verb 'affect' should be 'affects' to agree with the singular subject 'making lists'. Subject-verb agreement and correct word choice are important here.

× Like we need to train memory by practicing in our mind repeating those words.

✓ Like we need to train our memory by practicing in our mind and repeating those words.

The phrase 'train memory' should be 'train our memory' to include the possessive pronoun. Also, adding 'and' improves sentence flow. Correct pronoun use clarifies meaning.

× What the names about the grocery association items inside the list, then some of them?

✓ What are the names of the grocery association items inside the list, and then some of them?

The sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Adding 'are' after 'What' forms a question. 'About' should be 'of' to indicate possession. The phrase is still somewhat unclear but corrected for grammar. Proper question formation and preposition use are necessary.

× I say you said earlier, I usually feel more happy to create lists with the help of apps, mobile apps or just writing the names of items in the list in WhatsApp and sending a message to unknown group or my to myself.

✓ As you said earlier, I usually feel happier creating lists with the help of apps, mobile apps, or just writing the names of items in the list on WhatsApp and sending a message to an unknown group or to myself.

The phrase 'I say you said earlier' is corrected to 'As you said earlier' for clarity. 'Feel more happy' should be 'feel happier' (comparative adjective). 'To create lists' is better as 'creating lists' after 'feel happier'. 'In WhatsApp' should be 'on WhatsApp'. 'Unknown group' needs the article 'an'. 'My to myself' is corrected to 'to myself'. Proper preposition use, article use, and adjective form improve clarity and correctness.