Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I make a list when I shop.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes it does. I think it help me remember everything I need and avoid buying something.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because some people think make lists is trouble.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I'd prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more faster than writing on paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简单,缺乏细节和连贯性。建议增加原因或具体情况来丰富答案,同时避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议注意主谓一致和时态,同时用连词连接句子,使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me remember all my tasks and prevent me from missing anything important.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 句子结构不完整,语法错误明显。建议使用完整句子并解释原因,增加细节使回答更具体。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome and prefer to rely on memory instead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 表达基本清楚,但有语法错误(more faster应为faster)。建议注意比较级用法,并尝试丰富理由。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's faster and more convenient than writing on paper, plus I can easily edit the list anytime.
× I think it help me remember everything I need and avoid buying something.
✓ I think it helps me remember everything I need and avoid buying something.
这里的主语是第三人称单数"it",谓语动词"help"应加-s变为"helps",以符合第三人称单数的语法规则。
× Because some people think make lists is trouble.
✓ Because some people think making lists is trouble.
动词"think"后面接动名词作主语时,应使用动名词形式"making",而不是动词原形"make"。
× I'd prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more faster than writing on paper.
✓ I'd prefer to make lists on my phone because it's faster than writing on paper.
"faster"已经是比较级,前面不需要加"more","more faster"是重复比较级,属于错误用法。