Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do make a list when I show them. List on track and shopping accurately in order not to spend money on things I don't really need. So I have to jot down this really important things that I need to get which will help me write shopping to shop the right things.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
At times I do make a list for my work. Often I wake up and I decide to write down the things I want to do for the day, including how, including my productivity, and then I actually follow it. So I would say it works and it helps me stay on track, helps me, you know, manage my time efficiently.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I feel like people are different and people are entitled to their preference, so one person might like making the least to help them stay on track, while the other might just decide to do whatever at whatever time you're not minding the time or the work they're doing. So yeah, everyone is entitled to their preference.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer making a list on my phone, especially when it comes to organising my tasks, my work or or anything that has to do with my daily life. But when it comes to shopping, going out to get things, I prefer making the list on paper 'cause it helps me to actually stick with this, with what is on that paper, yeah.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: You need to improve your clarity and grammar. Try to speak more naturally and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay on track and avoid buying unnecessary items."
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay on track and avoid buying unnecessary items. This way, I only buy what I really need and save money.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be clearer and more concise. Avoid filler words like "you know" and use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, "Sometimes I make a list for my work. Usually, I write down my tasks for the day and follow the list, which helps me stay on track and manage my time efficiently."
Ví dụ: Sometimes I make a list for my work. Usually, I write down my tasks for the day and follow the list, which helps me stay on track and manage my time efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Try to be more precise and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words to explain your ideas clearly. For example, "People have different preferences. Some like making lists to stay organized, but others prefer to work spontaneously without planning."
Ví dụ: People have different preferences. Some like making lists to stay organized, but others prefer to work spontaneously without planning.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to contrast your preferences. For example, "I prefer making lists on my phone for daily tasks because it's convenient. However, for shopping, I like paper lists since they help me stick to what I need."
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone for daily tasks because it's convenient. However, for shopping, I like paper lists since they help me stick to what I need.
× Yes, I do make a list when I show them.
✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping.
The phrase 'when I show them' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'when I go shopping' to correctly express the time when the list is made.
× List on track and shopping accurately in order not to spend money on things I don't really need.
✓ I keep my list on track and shop accurately in order not to spend money on things I don't really need.
The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'I keep my list on track and shop accurately' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.
× So I have to jot down this really important things that I need to get which will help me write shopping to shop the right things.
✓ So I have to jot down these really important things that I need to get which will help me shop for the right things.
'This' should be 'these' to agree with the plural noun 'things'. Also, 'write shopping to shop' is incorrect; it should be 'help me shop for' to express the intended meaning.
× I feel like people are different and people are entitled to their preference, so one person might like making the least to help them stay on track, while the other might just decide to do whatever at whatever time you're not minding the time or the work they're doing.
✓ I feel like people are different and people are entitled to their preferences, so one person might like making the list to help them stay on track, while the other might just decide to do whatever at whatever time without minding the time or the work they're doing.
'Preference' should be plural 'preferences' to match 'people'. 'Least' is a typo and should be 'list'. Also, 'you're not minding' is incorrect; it should be 'without minding' to express disregard.