List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语言不够自然，有语法错误，如“go to shopping”应为“go shopping”，且句子结构重复，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并适当使用连接词使回答更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and keeps me organized while shopping.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“where when the time where I should do”不自然且难以理解，且“leaves”应为“list”。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇，并清晰表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a to-do list before work, including the tasks and their scheduled times. However, I don't always follow it strictly.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子，避免重复，并用连接词使逻辑更连贯。

Ví dụ: Some people might find making lists stressful because it feels like extra pressure, so they prefer to work more freely without a list.

Gợi ý: 回答内容完整且表达了观点，但存在语法错误，如“paper will lost”应为“paper can be lost”，且句子稍显重复。建议注意语法准确性，使用更自然的表达。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because paper lists can get lost, but digital lists are always accessible and easy to check anytime.

× Yes, I will make a list when I go to shopping.

✓ Yes, I will make a list when I go shopping.

介词“to”在“go shopping”中不需要，因为“go shopping”是固定短语，表示去购物。

× A list will make me know what I should buy and make me more clear about the things I should do in the shop.

✓ A list will help me know what I should buy and make me clearer about the things I should do in the shop.

动词“make”后接“know”不合适，应该用“help me know”。“more clear”应改为比较级“clearer”。

× Yes, before I go to work I will make a list and write a time where when the time where I should do and where I should go to doing what.

✓ Yes, before I go to work I will make a list and write down the time when I should do things and where I should go to do what.

“write a time where when the time where I should do”结构混乱，应简化为“write down the time when I should do things”。“go to doing”应改为“go to do”。

× But it seldom works because I seldom follow the leaves to do.

✓ But it seldom works because I seldom follow the list to do things.

“leaves”用错，应该是“list”，表示清单。

× Maybe they are more relaxed when doing work.

✓ Maybe they feel more relaxed when doing work.

句子缺少谓语动词“feel”，导致句子结构不完整。

× Make a list will make them feel stressed so they don't like doing things by the least so they don't like.

✓ Making a list will make them feel stressed, so they don't like doing things by the list.

“Make a list”应改为动名词“Making a list”作主语。句子后半部分“by the least so they don't like”语义不清，改为“by the list”更合理。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because the paper will lost and if you make the list on your phone you can see it anytime, anywhere.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because the paper will be lost and if you make the list on your phone you can see it anytime, anywhere.

“will lost”缺少被动语态助动词“be”，应为“will be lost”。

× It's very convenient and you can check it more times than on the table.

✓ It's very convenient and you can check it more times than on paper.

“on the table”不合适，应该用“on paper”表示纸上。