Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I hardly ever go out so I need my many items at once. Making a list helps me remember everything I need and it makes the process more organized and convenient.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list before I began studying. Not only can it make my timetable more reasonable and efficient, but also it can motivate my resolution.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think it depends on a person's habits. For example, some people feel more productive when their time is well organized and they can follow a clear plan. However, others prefer a more relaxed schedule and don't like making lists because it feels too retractive for them.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on paper because it's more convenient to carry around anywhere I go. Also, writing things down helps me remember my tasks better and follow my plan more easily. Sometimes using paper feels more reliable than relying on my phones because I can't control myself to play my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了原因,但句子结构稍显复杂且有些冗长。建议简化句子,避免重复表达,同时使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I don't go out often. This way, I can buy many items at once. Making a list helps me remember everything and makes shopping more organized.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不准确,且表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性,并用更地道的表达方式说明列表的作用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before I start studying. It helps me organize my timetable efficiently and keeps me motivated to achieve my goals.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但“retractive”用词不当,建议使用更准确的词汇如“restrictive”。同时可以增加连接词使逻辑更清晰。
Ví dụ: I think it depends on personal habits. Some people feel more productive with a clear plan, but others prefer a relaxed schedule and dislike making lists because it feels too restrictive.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点和理由,但最后一句表达不够自然,建议用更地道的表达方式说明手机的干扰。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easy to carry and helps me remember tasks better. Also, I find paper more reliable since I get distracted easily when using my phone.
× Yes, I always make a list before I began studying.
✓ Yes, I always make a list before I begin studying.
句子中使用了过去时态'began',但根据上下文,描述的是习惯性动作,应该使用一般现在时'begin'。
× I need my many items at once.
✓ I need many items at once.
'my many items'中'my'和'many'同时修饰名词,语法不正确,应去掉'my',只用'many'修饰items。
× it feels too retractive for them.
✓ it feels too restrictive for them.
'retractive'不是正确的形容词,应该用'restrictive'表示'限制性的',符合句意。
× Sometimes using paper feels more reliable than relying on my phones because I can't control myself to play my phone.
✓ Sometimes using paper feels more reliable than relying on my phone because I can't control myself from playing with my phone.
'phones'应为单数'phone',且'control myself to play my phone'表达不正确,应该用'control myself from playing with my phone'表示'控制自己不玩手机'。