List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use the correct vocabulary, such as 'list' instead of 'label', and avoid repetition. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words for coherence. Keep your answer concise and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me find everything quickly. For example, by knowing exactly what I need, I can shop efficiently and avoid forgetting items.

Gợi ý: Use the correct word 'list' instead of 'leave' and avoid grammatical errors. Begin with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Provide specific examples to support your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organise my tasks. For instance, by setting clear goals and steps, I can complete my work more quickly and efficiently.

Gợi ý: Improve your grammar and word choice, for example, use 'labour-intensive' instead of 'labour demanding' and 'lazy' without 'just'. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific reasons.

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because it can be labour-intensive, and they might feel it's time-consuming. Additionally, if they have never tried it, they may not realise how much it can improve productivity.

Gợi ý: Clarify your ideas and use correct expressions, for example, 'tick off' instead of 'deliver'. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid unclear phrases. Keep your answer concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can easily tick off completed tasks. This helps me stay organised and focus better on the remaining items.

× Yes, I always make a label when I am in shopping because I want to get my thing as quick as I can.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I am shopping because I want to get my things as quickly as I can.

The phrase 'make a label' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list' to match the context. Also, 'in shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'shopping' without 'in'. Additionally, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to refer to multiple items, and 'quick' should be the adverb 'quickly' to modify the verb 'get'.

× So making a list can really help me to do that because it's clear my goal and how much to get to the spot efficiently.

✓ So making a list can really help me to do that because it clarifies my goal and how much to get to the spot efficiently.

The phrase 'it's clear my goal' is incorrect; it should be 'it clarifies my goal' to express that the list makes the goal clear. The original sentence lacks a proper verb to connect the subject and object, causing confusion.

× So I can get quickly finish my shop by making a list.

✓ So I can quickly finish my shopping by making a list.

The adverb 'quickly' should be placed before the verb phrase 'finish my shopping' to correctly modify the action. Also, 'shop' as a noun is less appropriate here; 'shopping' as a gerund fits better.

× Yes, I always make a leave for my work because it really helped me to finish my work efficiently.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because it really helps me to finish my work efficiently.

The word 'leave' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'list'. Also, 'helped' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so 'helps' in present tense is appropriate.

× Because when I make a list for my work, I can set a lot of goals and I can make a lot of steps toward it without so that I know how what I can do to finish the work in a very quick way.

✓ When I make a list for my work, I can set a lot of goals and take many steps towards them so that I know what I can do to finish the work quickly.

The phrase 'without so that' is incorrect; 'so that' alone is sufficient to express purpose. Also, 'make a lot of steps toward it' is better expressed as 'take many steps towards them' to match plural 'goals'. 'How what I can do' is incorrect; it should be 'what I can do'. 'In a very quick way' is better as 'quickly'.

× I think that is partly because that making a list is also labour demanding and some people just lazy for that.

✓ I think that is partly because making a list is also labour demanding and some people are just lazy about it.

The phrase 'some people just lazy for that' is incorrect; it should be 'some people are just lazy about it' to use the correct verb and preposition with the pronoun.

× And also they might have never tried it before and they can't see how beneficial it is and they don't know how much productivity they can it can improve by making the list.

✓ Also, they might have never tried it before, so they can't see how beneficial it is and don't know how much productivity it can improve by making the list.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions 'and' and awkward phrasing 'how much productivity they can it can improve'. It is clearer to use 'so' to connect the clauses and correct the phrase to 'how much productivity it can improve'.

× I prefer to make this on my phone rather than on my paper because every time I finish one step, I can deliver that one and then I will never sit up, ever.

✓ I prefer to make this on my phone rather than on paper because every time I finish one step, I can delete it and then I will never miss it, ever.

The phrase 'deliver that one' is incorrect; it should be 'delete it' to mean removing the completed item. 'Sit up' is incorrect in this context; 'miss it' or 'forget it' fits better. Also, 'on my paper' is better as 'on paper'.

× So it's help me to simplify my place and help me to get more focus on the rest of the list.

✓ So it helps me to simplify my place and helps me to focus more on the rest of the list.

'It's help me' should be 'it helps me' to agree with third person singular. 'Help me to get more focus' is better expressed as 'helps me to focus more' for natural phrasing.