Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the market because it helps me avoid buying things I don't really need. It also makes shopping more convenient and save me a lot of time. For example, when I have a list, I can quickly find everything without wandering around the store.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
For your work, Each time I began my work, I always make a list because it helps me a world many distractions and stay focused on my text. For example, by having a clear plan, I can manage my time better and complete my work more efficiently. This method really improves my.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Maybe some people don't like making lists because it can put a lot of pressure on them. They might feel that making list limits their creativity and freedom. Also, if they fail to complete everything on the list, they could lose confidence and feel discouraged.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's very convenient. For instance, whenever I unlock my to play games or check messages, the list pops up as a helpful reminder, which ensures I don't forget any important text during the day.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 你的回答整体流畅且内容具体,但有些语法错误和用词不当,如“save me a lot of time”应为“saves me a lot of time”。建议注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the market because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items. It also makes shopping more convenient and saves me a lot of time. For example, with a list, I can quickly find everything without wandering around the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整,如“helps me a world many distractions”不通顺,且最后一句未完成。建议加强句子完整性和语法准确性,避免表达模糊。
Ví dụ: For my work, I always make a list at the beginning because it helps me avoid many distractions and stay focused on my tasks. For example, having a clear plan allows me to manage my time better and complete my work more efficiently. This method really improves my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且逻辑清晰,但“making list”应为“making lists”,注意名词复数形式。建议注意细节语法和词汇的准确使用。
Ví dụ: Maybe some people don't like making lists because it can put a lot of pressure on them. They might feel that making lists limits their creativity and freedom. Also, if they fail to complete everything on the list, they could lose confidence and feel discouraged.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了不完整和不连贯的表达,如“whenever I unlock my to play games or check messages”缺少名词,且“important text”用词不当。建议注意句子完整性和词汇准确性。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's very convenient. For instance, whenever I unlock my phone to play games or check messages, the list pops up as a helpful reminder, which ensures I don't forget any important tasks during the day.
× It also makes shopping more convenient and save me a lot of time.
✓ It also makes shopping more convenient and saves me a lot of time.
这里的主语是第三人称单数(It),谓语动词需要用第三人称单数形式,因此将 save 改为 saves。
× For your work, Each time I began my work, I always make a list because it helps me a world many distractions and stay focused on my text.
✓ For your work, each time I begin my work, I always make a list because it helps me avoid many distractions and stay focused on my tasks.
句中 'began' 是过去式,但句意表达习惯性动作,应使用一般现在时 'begin'。'helps me a world many distractions' 结构错误,应为 'helps me avoid many distractions'。'text' 用词不当,应为 'tasks'。
× This method really improves my.
✓ This method really improves my work.
句子不完整,缺少宾语,导致表达不清晰。应补充宾语 'work' 使句子完整。
× Maybe some people don't like making lists because it can put a lot of pressure on them. They might feel that making list limits their creativity and freedom.
✓ Maybe some people don't like making lists because it can put a lot of pressure on them. They might feel that making lists limits their creativity and freedom.
'making list' 中 'list' 应为复数形式 'lists',因为前文提到的是复数形式,保持一致。
× For instance, whenever I unlock my to play games or check messages, the list pops up as a helpful reminder, which ensures I don't forget any important text during the day.
✓ For instance, whenever I unlock my phone to play games or check messages, the list pops up as a helpful reminder, which ensures I don't forget any important tasks during the day.
缺少名词 'phone',导致句子不完整。'important text' 用词不当,应为 'important tasks' 更符合语境。