List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为简洁，但表达不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复，如将“this kind of list oriented shopping”改为“shopping with a list”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need and makes my shopping more efficient.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够流畅的问题。建议注意时态一致性和词汇搭配，如“give me a huge satisfactory”应改为“gives me great satisfaction”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work every day and check off tasks as I complete them. It helps me stay motivated and gives me great satisfaction when I finish everything.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰，有语法和重复错误。建议简化句子结构，明确表达原因，并避免重复词汇。

Ví dụ: Some people might dislike making lists because it makes them feel stressed, or they prefer to handle tasks randomly rather than following a plan.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如缺少动词不定式的to。建议改为“I prefer to make a list on paper”。同时，表达可以更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because if I use my phone, I might get distracted by other apps, which reduces my efficiency.

× Yes I do. Making a list can help me to remember what to buy and this kind of list oriented shopping can be more effective for me.

✓ Yes I do. Making a list can help me remember what to buy and this kind of list-oriented shopping can be more effective for me.

动词help后面接动词不定式to remember或动词原形remember都可以，但这里用help me to remember显得多余，通常用help me remember更自然。list oriented应加连字符，构成复合形容词。

× Yes, I make a list for my work everyday and I will check one after I finish one job.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work every day and I will check one after I finish a job.

everyday是形容词，表示“日常的”，此处应使用副词短语every day表示“每天”。finish one job中，one job前应加冠词a，表示“一项工作”。

× I think it works very well on me because it motivates me to work more efficiently and give me a huge satisfactory after I finish all my jobs.

✓ I think it works very well for me because it motivates me to work more efficiently and gives me a huge satisfaction after I finish all my jobs.

短语works on me用法不当，应为works for me表示“对我有效”。动词give主语是it，需用第三人称单数形式gives。satisfactory是形容词，名词应为satisfaction。

× I think making a list may let them feel so stressed about their work so that they won't finish their work work more efficiently or they are just more into finishing the random works.

✓ I think making a list may make them feel so stressed about their work that they won't finish their work more efficiently or they are just more into finishing random tasks.

may let them feel用法不当，通常用make them feel。so...that结构中so后不加that。work重复出现，应删去一个。random works用法不自然，改为random tasks更合适。

× I prefer make a list on paper because if I make a list on my phone, I think I will just start play with it.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because if I make a list on my phone, I think I will just start playing with it.

prefer后应接不定式to make。start后应接动名词playing。

× It will distract me from my work and reduce my efficiency.

✓ It will distract me from my work and reduce my efficiency.

此句语法正确，无需修改。