List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit repetitive and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use correct plural forms and verb tenses. For example, instead of repeating 'I waste my money' and 'I ended up getting so many stuffs', you can combine ideas and use more precise vocabulary.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because without it, I tend to buy unnecessary items. This leads to overspending and eventually wasting those products. Therefore, making a list helps me shop more efficiently and save money.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but lacks coherence and contains informal language. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid contractions like 'wanna' in formal speaking. Also, explain your reasons more clearly to enrich your response.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I find it restrictive. When I study or work, I prefer to follow my interests at the moment rather than a fixed plan, which helps me stay motivated.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'gotta' and 'be gonna'. Provide a clear reason why some people dislike making lists.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they feel pressured to complete all the tasks, which can cause stress. However, lists can actually help improve efficiency if used properly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use more precise vocabulary. Also, use correct verb forms and sentence structures.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the tactile experience. Writing on physical paper feels more satisfying to me than using digital devices.

× I would get the thing that I don't really need.

✓ I would get things that I don't really need.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items, not just one.

× I spend a lot of money on them and I waste my money and I ended up getting so many stuffs that I don't really need

✓ I spend a lot of money on them and I waste my money and I ended up getting so much stuff that I don't really need

The word 'stuffs' is incorrect; 'stuff' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized.

× So making this is very important for me.

✓ So making this list is very important for me.

The phrase 'making this' is incomplete and unclear; adding 'list' clarifies the meaning and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I just wanna do whatever I want at the time.

✓ I just want to do whatever I want at the time.

The informal contraction 'wanna' should be replaced with the correct modal verb phrase 'want to' in formal speech.

× In my opinion making lists makes us like we gotta do the thing on the list and be gonna be so stressed out.

✓ In my opinion, making lists makes us feel like we have to do the things on the list and can be very stressful.

The original sentence has informal and incorrect expressions such as 'gotta' and 'be gonna be'; it needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So with that list is more efficient way to work.

✓ So having that list is a more efficient way to work.

The original sentence lacks a subject and article; adding 'having' and 'a' corrects the sentence structure.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I'm the type of person who really like to use the physical paper instead of using mobile devices because it just makes me feel good.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I'm the type of person who really likes to use physical paper instead of mobile devices because it just makes me feel good.

The verb 'like' should be 'likes' to agree with the singular subject 'person'; also, 'the physical paper' is better as 'physical paper' for natural expression.