List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight awkwardness in phrasing. For example, 'helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense, and 'making a list help me save time' should be 'helps me save time'. Also, avoid redundancy such as 'the stress that comes from the process' which could be simplified. Try to use linking words like 'therefore' or 'as a result' to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me prioritise the items I really need. Therefore, I avoid buying unnecessary things and save both time and stress. For example, when I shop for household items, having a list ensures I don't forget anything important.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical mistakes and could be more fluent. For instance, 'make list' should be 'make a list', and 'helped' should be 'helps' to keep present tense. The phrase 'at every time' is awkward; consider 'at all times' or 'constantly'. Adding linking words like 'so' or 'thus' would improve flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me stay productive. I prioritise the tasks I need to complete, so I can work efficiently and effectively throughout the day.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'creating needs while time consuming' is unclear; it should be 'creating lists quite time-consuming'. Also, avoid repeating words like 'in in'. Use linking words such as 'for example' and 'however' to improve coherence. Try to be more specific about why people find lists inflexible.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find the process quite time-consuming. For example, they believe the time spent writing a list could be better used doing tasks. Moreover, they feel lists are too rigid and don't allow for flexibility in their plans.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but contains minor errors and could be more concise. For example, 'make list' should be 'make a list', and 'the tax I want to perform' seems to be a typo, possibly 'task'. Use linking words like 'for example' appropriately and avoid redundancy. Try to vary vocabulary slightly for better effect.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because my phone offers helpful features like reminders and notifications. For example, I receive alerts for tasks I need to complete, which is something paper lists cannot provide.

× Sure, I make a list whenever I go shopping because it helped me prioritize the things I really need and prevent me from purchasing unnecessary items.

✓ Sure, I make a list whenever I go shopping because it helps me prioritize the things I really need and prevent me from purchasing unnecessary items.

The sentence mixes present tense 'make' with past tense 'helped'. Since the action is habitual, present tense 'helps' should be used to maintain tense consistency.

× Moreover, making a list help me save time and the stress that comes from the process.

✓ Moreover, making a list helps me save time and the stress that comes from the process.

The subject 'making a list' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in third person singular form.

× For instance, when I need to purchase household items, I make a list. In that way, I get important things.

✓ For instance, when I need to purchase household items, I make a list. In that way, I get the important things.

The phrase 'important things' requires the definite article 'the' to specify particular items, correcting the article usage.

× Definitely, I make list for my work because it helped me stay productive.

✓ Definitely, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay productive.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to match the present tense context.

× When I work, I prioritize the necessary things I need to do at every time.

✓ When I work, I prioritize the necessary things I need to do every time.

The phrase 'at every time' is incorrect; 'every time' is the correct expression without the preposition 'at'.

× Some people don't like making lists because they find the process of creating needs while time consuming.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find the process of creating needs time-consuming.

The phrase 'while time consuming' is incorrect here; 'time-consuming' is the correct adjective to describe the process.

× For instance, they feel the time used in in creating a list can be added and become more productive.

✓ For instance, they feel the time used in creating a list can be better spent to become more productive.

The phrase 'added and become more productive' is unclear and incorrect. 'Better spent to become more productive' correctly conveys the intended meaning.

× Moreover, they find it a strict method rather than it being flexible.

✓ Moreover, they find it a strict method rather than a flexible one.

The phrase 'rather than it being flexible' is awkward; replacing it with 'rather than a flexible one' improves clarity and correctness.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than the traditional use of paper because the device offers assistive technologies such as reminders and notifications.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than the traditional use of paper because the device offers assistive technologies such as reminders and notifications.

This sentence is correct; no article errors detected here.

× When I make list on my phone, for instance, I get reminders on the tax I want to perform at the time, which is in contrast to having it on paper.

✓ When I make a list on my phone, for instance, I get reminders on the task I want to perform at the time, which is in contrast to having it on paper.

The noun 'list' requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'tax' is a typo and should be 'task'.