Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I go to shop, make a list.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I make a list for my work it official.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because some people think make lists not easy.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够完整且语法错误较多,建议用完整句子表达,并且增加细节说明,比如为什么要列购物清单。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不清晰且语法错误严重,建议明确回答问题并解释清单的作用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks, and it helps me stay organized and complete my duties efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不自然且缺乏细节,建议用完整句子说明原因,并举例说明。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,建议补充理由并用完整句子表达。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit or add items anytime.
× Yes, I go to shop, make a list.
✓ Yes, I go shopping and make a list.
原句中缺少连词,且动词短语使用不当。'go to shop' 应改为 'go shopping',表示去购物的动作;两个动作之间需要用连词 'and' 连接。
× Yes, I make a list for my work it official.
✓ Yes, I make a list for my work; it is official.
原句中缺少连接词或标点符号,导致句子结构混乱。应在两个独立分句之间加分号或句号,并补充主语和动词,使句子完整。
× Because some people think make lists not easy.
✓ Because some people think making lists is not easy.
原句中动词 'make' 应改为动名词 'making',且缺少系动词 'is',使句子完整。
× I prefer my phone.
✓ I prefer using my phone.
原句缺少动词或动名词,表达不完整。'prefer' 后面应接动名词或名词短语,故改为 'prefer using my phone'。