Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm accustomed to making list before going shopping. For example, I usually write down the items I need on my mobile phone. Which helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important. I think that this habit saves my. Time and make shopping more efficient.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I make a list for my work every day. It helps me stay organized and prioritize the most important tasks to finish. I think it's a good hybrid because it helps me. Work more efficiently.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think it depends on different people. For example, some people may have enough available time and not many tasks to finish. Otherwise, some other people may don't have such a habit to make a list. So it just depends on different personal traits and lifestyles.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone, especially using some listing apps because I find it is more clear and convenient. Which can remind me. Of all the schedules I have to do and the tasks I need to finish, which helps me stay organized.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法和句子结构需更自然流畅,避免句子碎片,如“Which helps me stay organized”应与前句合并。同时,注意拼写和标点错误,如“making list”应为“making a list”,“saves my. Time”应为“saves my time”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping. For example, I write down the items I need on my mobile phone, which helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important. I believe this habit saves me time and makes shopping more efficient.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了不完整的句子,如“because it helps me. Work more efficiently”,应避免句子断裂。用词“good hybrid”不准确,建议用更贴切的表达。建议增加连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. It helps me stay organized and prioritize the most important tasks to complete. I think it's very helpful because it allows me to work more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“may don't have”应为“may not have”。表达重复且不够具体,建议用更自然的表达方式,避免“depends on different people”重复。建议增加具体原因和连接词。
Ví dụ: I think it varies from person to person. For example, some people might have plenty of free time and fewer tasks, so they don't feel the need to make lists. Others may simply not be used to this habit due to their personal traits or lifestyle.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在句子碎片,如“Which can remind me. Of all the schedules...”,应合并为完整句子。表达重复,建议用连接词使句子更连贯。词汇使用较简单,可适当丰富。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone, especially using listing apps, because I find them clearer and more convenient. They can remind me of all the schedules and tasks I need to complete, which helps me stay organized.
× Yes, I'm accustomed to making list before going shopping.
✓ Yes, I'm accustomed to making lists before going shopping.
这里的“list”应该用复数形式“lists”,因为习惯是指多次制作购物清单。
× Which helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.
✓ This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.
句子开头用“Which”不完整,应该用“This”引导完整句子。
× I think that this habit saves my. Time and make shopping more efficient.
✓ I think that this habit saves my time and makes shopping more efficient.
“Time”前不需要句号,且“make”应与主语“habit”保持单数形式,改为“makes”。
× I think it's a good hybrid because it helps me. Work more efficiently.
✓ I think it's a good habit because it helps me work more efficiently.
“hybrid”应为“habit”,且句中不应有句号断开,保持句子连贯。
× Otherwise, some other people may don't have such a habit to make a list.
✓ Otherwise, some other people may not have such a habit to make a list.
情态动词“may”后不加“do”,应直接用“not”表示否定。
× Which can remind me. Of all the schedules I have to do and the tasks I need to finish, which helps me stay organized.
✓ It can remind me of all the schedules I have to do and the tasks I need to finish, which helps me stay organized.
句子开头用“Which”不完整,应改为“It”,并去掉句中多余的句号,使句子完整通顺。