Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. I usually make a list when I shop. I think it's a a common things. It's a common thing. Everyone should do that because if you go the if you go to the shop without at least I think it very easy to forget them.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Oh yeah, of course. I usually make A to do list in a very early morning before I get hand to work. Without a list it's easy to forget important stocks, especially when an.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Well, frankly, I don't know. I have no idea about why people don't like making this because I think it's very useful, but I guess maybe they will think it's a little time wasting.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Oh, I prefer to make a list on paper. I think the feeling of writing a can make me stay organized and make me give me more time to think about my tasks throughout the day.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误,表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更准确的表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有语法错误,表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点,注意语法和句子完整性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning before work. It helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简单,缺乏具体细节。建议提供更多具体原因,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on memory instead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,表达不够流畅。建议注意句子结构,避免重复,并清晰表达观点。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me focus and organize my thoughts better.
× I think it's a a common things.
✓ I think it's a common thing.
这里的主语是单数形式"a common thing",但原句用了复数"things",导致单复数不一致。应使用单数形式。
× if you go the if you go to the shop without at least I think it very easy to forget them.
✓ if you go to the shop without a list, I think it's very easy to forget things.
原句中缺少介词"to",且表达不完整,缺少"a list",导致句子不通顺。应补充完整并正确使用介词。
× I usually make A to do list in a very early morning before I get hand to work.
✓ I usually make a to-do list very early in the morning before I get to work.
"A to do list"应为"a to-do list",且"in a very early morning"应改为"very early in the morning","get hand to work"应为"get to work",量词和短语搭配错误。
× Without a list it's easy to forget important stocks, especially when an.
✓ Without a list, it's easy to forget important tasks, especially when busy.
"stocks"用词不当,应为"tasks",且句子不完整,缺少后半部分,需补充完整。
× I have no idea about why people don't like making this because I think it's very useful,
✓ I have no idea why people don't like making them because I think it's very useful,
"making this"中的"this"指代不明确,应使用复数代词"them"指代"lists"。
× but I guess maybe they will think it's a little time wasting.
✓ but I guess maybe they think it's a little time-wasting.
"time wasting"应连写为复合形容词"time-wasting",且"will think"改为一般现在时"think"更符合语境。
× I think the feeling of writing a can make me stay organized and make me give me more time to think about my tasks throughout the day.
✓ I think the feeling of writing can help me stay organized and give me more time to think about my tasks throughout the day.
原句中"writing a can make me"结构错误,缺少宾语,且"make me give me"重复,应改为"help me stay organized and give me"。