Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, I don't like to make a list when I go in shop.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list in my work. I write something I need to do on the sticky notes and put them on my desk.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Maybe they think writing writing it can help them remember.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer use my phone to make a list because I use my phone all the time. I'm not take a pen with me.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,语法错误较多,且表达不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并注意介词的使用。
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但句子结构简单,缺少连接词使表达更连贯。建议使用连接词丰富句子结构。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work. For example, I write down tasks on sticky notes and put them on my desk to remind myself.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有重复词汇,表达不清晰。建议给出更具体的原因,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: Maybe some people think that writing things down is unnecessary because they believe they can remember everything without a list.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构,使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, and I rarely carry a pen.
× No, I don't like to make a list when I go in shop.
✓ No, I don't like to make a list when I go shopping.
这里的错误是介词使用不当。短语“go in shop”不符合英语习惯,正确表达是“go shopping”,表示去购物。
× Yes, I usually make a list in my work.
✓ Yes, I usually make a list at my work.
这里介词使用错误。表达“在工作时”应使用“at my work”而不是“in my work”。
× Maybe they think writing writing it can help them remember.
✓ Maybe they think writing it can help them remember.
句子中“writing”重复出现,属于代词使用错误,应去掉多余的“writing”。
× I prefer use my phone to make a list because I use my phone all the time.
✓ I prefer to use my phone to make a list because I use my phone all the time.
动词“prefer”后应接不定式“to use”,而不是直接接动词原形。
× I'm not take a pen with me.
✓ I don't take a pen with me.
这里错误使用了现在进行时“I'm not take”,应使用一般现在时否定形式“I don't take”。