List— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Actually yes, I make a shopping list because it helps me to save both money and time. Also not to forget about necessary items and not to buy unnecessary products.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For example, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, they don't consider it as a good structure and they think it might waste their time.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because in my opinion it's much faster and more convenient.
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Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: Ответ хороший, но можно сделать его более естественным и связным, используя связующие слова и избегая повторов. Например, вместо "Also not to forget... and not to buy..." лучше сказать "so I don't forget necessary items and avoid buying unnecessary products."
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me save both money and time, so I don't forget necessary items and avoid buying unnecessary products.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить связующее слово для плавности, например, "For instance" вместо "For example". Также можно немного разнообразить лексику.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For instance, by prioritizing tasks, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Ответ можно улучшить, сделав его более естественным и расширенным. Например, использовать связующие слова и более точные выражения, а также объяснить мнение подробнее.
Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they don't see it as an effective way to organize their tasks, and they believe it might waste their time.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Ответ можно сделать более связным и естественным, используя связующие слова и более разнообразную лексику. Например, "I prefer making lists on my phone since it's faster and more convenient."
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone since it's faster and more convenient than using paper.
Ngữ pháp
× Actually yes, I make a shopping list because it helps me to save both money and time. Also not to forget about necessary items and not to buy unnecessary products.
✓ Actually yes, I make a shopping list because it helps me save both money and time. Also, it helps me not to forget necessary items and not to buy unnecessary products.
The phrase 'helps me to save' is grammatically correct but the infinitive 'to' is often omitted after 'help' in English for smoother flow. Also, the original sentence lacks a subject in the second part ('Also not to forget...'), which makes it incomplete. Adding 'it helps me' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.
× In my opinion, they don't consider it as a good structure and they think it might waste their time.
✓ In my opinion, they don't consider it a good structure and they think it might waste their time.
The verb 'consider' is followed directly by the object without the preposition 'as'. Using 'consider it as' is incorrect in standard English. Therefore, removing 'as' corrects the sentence.
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