Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I prefer make a list. To everything because it helps me to ensure everything need to do.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Oh yes, I often make a list for my work. This can this helps me to remember everything I need to do. It can help me a while of getting important things and save my time.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Actually I am not understand the people they don't making list. Make list have a lot of benefits I think.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Umm, I off. I often make a list on paper. I prefer writing a list on paper because it can help me remember. Clearly.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构,避免重复和不完整的句子。可以尝试用完整句子表达观点,并适当扩展细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer to make a list for everything because it helps me ensure that I don't forget anything I need to do.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题,句子不连贯。建议使用连词连接句子,使表达更流畅,同时注意词汇的准确使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me remember all my tasks. This way, I can prioritize important things and save time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议先直接回答问题,然后用具体理由支持观点,使用正确的时态和句型。
Ví dụ: Actually, I don't understand why some people don't like making lists because I think lists have many benefits.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达错误,句子不完整。建议使用完整句子表达观点,并解释原因,注意连贯性。
Ví dụ: I often make lists on paper because writing them down helps me remember things more clearly.
× Yes, I prefer make a list.
✓ Yes, I prefer making a list.
动词prefer后面应接动名词形式making,而不是动词原形make。
× To everything because it helps me to ensure everything need to do.
✓ For everything because it helps me to ensure everything needs to be done.
介词to用错,应使用for表示“为了所有事情”。
× everything need to do.
✓ everything needs to be done.
主语everything是单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式needs,且表达被动含义时应使用被动语态needs to be done。
× This can this helps me to remember everything I need to do.
✓ This helps me to remember everything I need to do.
句子中重复使用了this can this,结构混乱,应简化为This helps me...。
× It can help me a while of getting important things and save my time.
✓ It can help me save time by getting important things done.
短语a while of用法错误,应改为表达节省时间的正确短语。
× Actually I am not understand the people they don't making list.
✓ Actually, I do not understand why people don't make lists.
动词understand应使用一般现在时do not understand,making应改为动词原形make,且句子结构需调整。
× they don't making list.
✓ they don't make lists.
助动词do后应接动词原形make,而不是动名词making。
× Make list have a lot of benefits I think.
✓ Making lists has a lot of benefits, I think.
list应使用复数lists,动名词making作为主语,谓语动词用第三人称单数has。
× Umm, I off.
✓ Umm, I often...
单词off用错,应为often表示频率副词。
× I prefer writing a list on paper because it can help me remember. Clearly.
✓ I prefer writing a list on paper because it can help me remember clearly.
副词clearly应放在动词remember之后,不能单独成句。