List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, especially at the end. Try to complete your sentences fully and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Yes, I sometimes make a list on my phone to remember grocery items or anything I want to buy, but often I forget to make one."

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes make a list on my phone to remember grocery items or anything I want to buy, but often I forget to make one.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with grammatical errors and unfinished sentences. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words. For example, "Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organise tasks and remember important deadlines. This method has worked well for me, especially when I have many tasks to complete."

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organise tasks and remember important deadlines. This method has worked well for me, especially when I have many tasks to complete.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to use linking words and clearer vocabulary. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and time-consuming. Moreover, they may feel it is inconvenient or simply feel lazy to do it."

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and time-consuming. Moreover, they may feel it is inconvenient or simply feel lazy to do it.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to organise your ideas logically and use linking words. For example, "I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and always with me. Sometimes, if I make lists on paper, I might forget them at home, but this is not a problem with my phone."

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and always with me. Sometimes, if I make lists on paper, I might forget them at home, but this is not a problem with my phone.

× Yes, I sometimes make a list on my phone for remembering the grocery item or anything which I would like to buy, but most of the time I forgot to make the.

✓ Yes, I sometimes make a list on my phone for remembering the grocery items or anything which I would like to buy, but most of the time I forget to make it.

The word 'item' should be plural 'items' because it refers to multiple groceries. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to maintain present tense consistency. The phrase 'make the' is incomplete and should be 'make it' to refer back to the list.

× Yes, I sometimes make a list on my phone for remembering the grocery item or anything which I would like to buy, but most of the time I forgot to make the.

✓ Yes, I sometimes make a list on my phone for remembering the grocery items or anything which I would like to buy, but most of the time I forget to make it.

The verb 'forgot' is in past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'forget' to match 'sometimes make'. This maintains tense consistency in the sentence.

× Yeah, probably I make a list for my work as it helps me to divide my work and to remember the importance due dates to finish the task.

✓ Yeah, probably I make a list for my work as it helps me to divide my work and to remember the important due dates to finish the tasks.

The phrase 'importance due dates' is incorrect; it should be 'important due dates' (adjective use). Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because multiple tasks are implied.

× It definitely wo has worked for me in past where I have to do some task and when I have a lot of tasks with me I would.

✓ It definitely has worked for me in the past when I had to do some tasks and when I had a lot of tasks with me.

The phrase 'wo has worked' is incorrect and should be 'has worked'. 'In past' needs the article 'the' to become 'in the past'. The verb tense should be past 'had' to match the past context. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks'.

× People probably don't make less as it is very boring to make a list and it consumes a lot of time and then don't find it much convenient just because of laziness.

✓ People probably don't make lists as it is very boring to make a list and it consumes a lot of time and they don't find it very convenient just because of laziness.

The word 'less' is incorrect; it should be 'lists' (plural noun). Also, 'then don't find' is missing a subject and should be 'they don't find'. 'Much convenient' should be 'very convenient' for correct adjective use.

× I think people don't enjoy that much of making less.

✓ I think people don't enjoy making lists that much.

'Making less' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists' (plural noun). The phrase is reordered for natural English expression.

× Because of convenience and easily and easy availability, I make less on my phone as I take my phone everywhere so it's easily accessible.

✓ Because of convenience and easy availability, I make lists on my phone as I take my phone everywhere so it's easily accessible.

'Easily' is an adverb and should be 'easy' (adjective) to modify 'availability'. 'Make less' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists' (plural noun).

× And also the notes they sometimes, sometimes it's a possibility that I may forget at home, so that is not with the case.

✓ Also, sometimes I may forget the notes at home, but that is not the case.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses conjunctions incorrectly. 'And also' is redundant; 'Also' suffices. The phrase 'that is not with the case' is incorrect; it should be 'that is not the case'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.