List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to improve clarity and grammar by using correct words and sentence structures. Avoid redundancy and ensure your answer is coherent and natural. For example, use 'list' instead of 'lid' and organise your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because if I don't, I might forget what I need and end up buying unnecessary items like cakes or Coca-Cola, which I don't really need.

Gợi ý: Improve coherence by using linking words and clearer explanations. Also, try to avoid informal expressions like 'too lazy' and instead explain your habits more formally.

Ví dụ: I have tried making a list when preparing for my English test, but it doesn't always work because I tend to follow my own interests rather than the list. For instance, if I feel like studying maths, I start with that even if the list says I should study English first.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, try to express your opinion more clearly and politely.

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous rather than follow strict routines. However, others find lists helpful to organise their tasks step by step.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and avoid informal phrases like 'I just want to screen the social media'.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because handwriting makes me feel satisfied and relaxed. In contrast, if I use my phone, I tend to get distracted by social media.

× Yes, I definitely need a lid when I shop for sometimes I didn't make it, I would've forgot what I want to buy and I'm buying something like non useful thing, for example some cakes, some Coca-Cola.

✓ Yes, I definitely need a list when I shop because sometimes I don't make it, I would forget what I want to buy and end up buying things that are not useful, for example some cakes or some Coca-Cola.

The word 'lid' is incorrect; it should be 'list' to match the context. Also, 'sometimes I didn't make it' should be 'sometimes I don't make it' to maintain present tense consistency. 'I would've forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'I would forget' to express a habitual past possibility. 'Non useful thing' should be 'things that are not useful' to correctly use plural and adjective form.

× I would've forgot what I want to buy and I'm buying something like non useful thing, for example some cakes, some Coca-Cola.

✓ I would forget what I want to buy and end up buying things that are not useful, for example some cakes or some Coca-Cola.

The phrase 'I would've forgot' is incorrect because 'forgot' is the simple past tense; the correct past participle is 'forgotten'. However, since the sentence refers to a habitual past action, 'would forget' is more appropriate. Also, 'I'm buying' should be 'end up buying' to better express the unintended action.

× I listen, I don't need it so I definitely list.

✓ I realise I don't need it, so I definitely make a list.

'I listen' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'I realise' or 'I find'. Also, 'I definitely list' is incomplete; the verb 'make' is needed to form 'make a list'. Modal verb usage is not directly involved here, but the sentence structure needs correction.

× I tried to make a list when I prepare my English test.

✓ I try to make a list when I prepare for my English test.

The verb tense should be present simple 'try' to match the habitual action. Also, 'prepare my English test' is missing the preposition 'for'. This is a preposition issue but also affects the sentence meaning.

× I tried to make a list when I prepare my English test.

✓ I try to make a list when I prepare for my English test.

The verb 'prepare' requires the preposition 'for' when indicating the object of preparation. Also, 'tried' should be 'try' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I don't think it works because I'm too lazy to follow the list.

✓ I don't think it works because I'm too lazy to follow the list.

No correction needed here as the modal verb usage is correct.

× I just follow my mind when I'm studying.

✓ I just follow my mind when I'm studying.

No correction needed; the present tense usage is appropriate.

× For example, like I want to study math, I just start math but the list saying I need to study for English, I wouldn't always follow this.

✓ For example, if I want to study math, I just start math but if the list says I need to study English, I don't always follow it.

'The list saying' should be 'the list says' to agree with the singular subject. 'I wouldn't always follow this' should be 'I don't always follow it' to maintain present tense and correct pronoun usage.

× but the list saying I need to study for English,

✓ but the list says I need to study English,

The verb 'saying' is incorrect here; it should be 'says' to agree with the singular subject 'list' in present simple tense.

× I guess people who always want to make this before they're going to work or studying for something is that they want to follow the rules step by step and make the things being regularly.

✓ I guess people who always want to make this before they go to work or study something do so because they want to follow the rules step by step and do things regularly.

'Going to work or studying for something' should be parallel: 'go to work or study something'. 'Make the things being regularly' is incorrect; it should be 'do things regularly'. Prepositions and verb forms need correction for clarity and grammar.

× I guess people who always want to make this before they're going to work or studying for something is that they want to follow the rules step by step and make the things being regularly.

✓ I guess people who always want to make this before they go to work or study something do so because they want to follow the rules step by step and do things regularly.

The verb 'is' does not agree with the plural subject 'people'; it should be 'do so' or 'do that'. Also, 'make the things being regularly' is incorrect; 'do things regularly' is correct.

× But for me, I wouldn't do that. So I just think those people very obedient to the road and they love the perfect scenes and.

✓ But for me, I wouldn't do that. So I just think those people are very obedient to the rules and they love perfect order.

'Very obedient to the road' is incorrect; it should be 'obedient to the rules'. 'Perfect scenes' is unclear; 'perfect order' or 'perfect systems' is more appropriate. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly.

× I say handwriting can make me feel very satisfied and I will feel very comfortable relaxing when I writing on paper compared to typing on computer.

✓ I say handwriting makes me feel very satisfied and comfortable and I feel relaxed when I write on paper compared to typing on a computer.

'When I writing' should be 'when I write' (verb form). 'Feel very comfortable relaxing' is awkward; 'feel comfortable and relaxed' is better. Also, 'typing on computer' needs the article 'a computer'.

× I will feel very comfortable relaxing when I writing on paper compared to typing on computer.

✓ I feel very comfortable and relaxed when I write on paper compared to typing on a computer.

'When I writing' is incorrect; it should be 'when I write' (simple present). 'Relaxing' is awkward here; 'relaxed' is better as an adjective. Also, 'typing on computer' needs the article 'a'.

× As soon as I take on my cell phone, I just want to screen the social media.

✓ As soon as I pick up my cell phone, I just want to scroll through social media.

'Take on my cell phone' is incorrect; 'pick up my cell phone' is correct. 'Screen the social media' is incorrect; 'scroll through social media' is the appropriate phrase.