Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Of course, I would like to make a list when I shopping in the shopping mall. It helps me to save my time.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely in my opinions. I guess if I make a list for my work, I think it is a good way for me to organize my task more clearly.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Well, there are various reasons behind it in my opinion. I guess maybe people think making this is a little bit difficult for them and a waste of time.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Of course, in my opinion, my preference goes to making lists in my form. It is a more convenient and straightforward way for me to make a list.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但语法错误较多,如“when I shopping”应为“when I shop”。建议注意动词时态和形式的正确使用,同时避免重复表达“shopping mall”,可以简化为“when I shop”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me save time and avoid forgetting important items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题,如“in my opinions”应为“in my opinion”,“organize my task”应为“organize my tasks”。建议使用更简洁明确的句子,并注意单复数和冠词的使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely make lists for my work because they help me organize my tasks more clearly and improve my efficiency.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够自然,且“making this”不明确。建议使用更具体的词汇,如“making lists”,并且避免模糊表达。可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Well, in my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult and think it wastes their time.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中“my form”应为“my phone”,这是明显的错误。建议注意单词拼写和表达准确性。同时,句子结构可以更简洁自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and straightforward for me.
× Of course, I would like to make a list when I shopping in the shopping mall.
✓ Of course, I would like to make a list when I am shopping in the shopping mall.
动词后面缺少助动词,表示进行时态时,动词需要用现在分词形式并且前面加上be动词。这里应使用“am shopping”表示正在购物。
× Yes, definitely in my opinions.
✓ Yes, definitely in my opinion.
“opinion”是不可数名词,不能用复数形式“opinions”。应使用单数形式“opinion”。
× I guess if I make a list for my work, I think it is a good way for me to organize my task more clearly.
✓ I guess if I make a list for my work, I think it is a good way for me to organize my tasks more clearly.
“task”应使用复数形式“tasks”,因为通常工作中有多个任务。
× Well, there are various reasons behind it in my opinion.
✓ Well, there are various reasons for it in my opinion.
“reasons behind it”表达不自然,通常用“reasons for it”表示“原因”。
× I guess maybe people think making this is a little bit difficult for them and a waste of time.
✓ I guess maybe people think making lists is a little bit difficult for them and a waste of time.
“making this”不明确,应具体指代“making lists”,使句子更清晰。
× Of course, in my opinion, my preference goes to making lists in my form.
✓ Of course, in my opinion, my preference goes to making lists on my phone.
“in my form”是错误表达,应为“on my phone”,表示在手机上。