List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“the thing what I need to buy”应为“the things I need to buy”，“avoid raising money”表达不清。建议注意语法准确性，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before going shopping because it helps me remember the things I need to buy and prevents impulsive purchases. For example, having a list allows me to shop more efficiently and save money.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“the thing that I need to do like a school assignment and project”应为“things I need to do, such as school assignments and projects”，“TA have a time management”不明确。建议加强语法练习，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

Ví dụ: I usually make a list for my studies because it helps me remember tasks like school assignments and projects. It also helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

Gợi ý: 回答中有逻辑和语法错误，如“most of the people just like to make a list”应为“most people don't like to make lists”，“prefer remember things mentally”应为“prefer to remember things mentally”。建议注意句子结构和逻辑表达，避免矛盾。

Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and time-consuming. For example, they prefer to remember things mentally rather than writing them down.

Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了，但可以增加细节和连接词使表达更自然流畅。建议扩展理由，使用连接词丰富内容。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember them better. Also, paper lists are easier to access without needing a device.

× it can help me remember the thing what I need to buy and prevents me from buying things impulsively.

✓ it can help me remember the things that I need to buy and prevents me from buying things impulsively.

这里的关系代词使用错误，'thing what' 应改为 'things that'，因为先行词是复数，且关系代词应使用 'that' 来引导定语从句。

× I can shop more efficiently and avoid raising money.

✓ I can shop more efficiently and avoid wasting money.

这里 'raising money' 用法错误，正确表达应为 'wasting money'，意思是避免浪费钱。

× it can help me remember the thing that I need to do like a school assignment and project and it's also helped me stay organized and TA have a time management.

✓ it can help me remember the things that I need to do like school assignments and projects and it also helps me stay organized and have time management.

1. 'thing' 应为复数 'things'，因为后面列举了多个任务。2. 'it's also helped' 时态错误，应为一般现在时 'it also helps'。3. 'TA have a time management' 语法错误，应改为 'have time management'。

× I think most of the people just like to make a list because it is wasting time and boring.

✓ I think most people don't like to make a list because it is a waste of time and boring.

1. 'most of the people' 一般说法是 'most people'。2. 'just like to make a list' 与上下文意思不符，应为 'don't like to make a list'。3. 'it is wasting time' 应改为 'it is a waste of time'。

× For example, they prefer remember things mentally and do not choose to make a list.

✓ For example, they prefer to remember things mentally and do not choose to make a list.

动词 'prefer' 后应接不定式 'to remember'，缺少 'to'。

× I prefer to make this on paper because when I write it down I can remember it well.

✓ I prefer to make the list on paper because when I write it down I can remember it well.

'make this' 不明确，应改为 'make the list'，指代更清晰。