Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes, I, I will make a list before I shop because, uh, it, it will, uh, notably to know what I, what I will buy.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Uh yes. I usually make a list before I work. I will umm before the day start I will list the thing I should do this remember. This helps me remember everything I.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because some people they find it is difficult for them to make a list or is very in it many time to make a list and or they don't know how to make a list.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on your on my phone 'cause I think it's convenient. I can make a list anywhere, anytime because I also with my phone, but.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有较多的语气词和重复,影响流畅性。建议减少填充词,句子结构更清晰,表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子,明确说明做清单的时间和效果。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a to-do list before the workday starts. It helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱,表达不清楚。建议简化句子,明确说明原因,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or they are not sure how to organize their tasks effectively.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和不完整句子,表达不流畅。建议使用完整句子,清晰表达偏好和原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient. I can add items anytime and anywhere since I always have my phone with me.
× I, I will make a list before I shop because, uh, it, it will, uh, notably to know what I, what I will buy.
✓ I will make a list before I shop because it will help me know what I will buy.
这里的 'will notably to know' 结构不正确,应该使用 'will help me know' 来表达将来帮助做某事的意思。动词后面需要接动词原形或不定式。
× I will umm before the day start I will list the thing I should do this remember.
✓ Before the day starts, I will list the things I should do to remember them.
主语是单数 'day',动词 'start' 应该用第三人称单数形式 'starts'。另外,句子结构不完整,需要补充 'to remember them' 来表达目的。
× I will list the thing I should do this remember.
✓ I will list the things I should do to remember them.
'thing' 应该用复数形式 'things',因为列出的通常是多项任务。
× Because some people they find it is difficult for them to make a list or is very in it many time to make a list and or they don't know how to make a list.
✓ Because some people find it difficult to make a list, or it takes too much time, and some don't know how to make a list.
句子结构混乱,重复使用主语 'some people they' 不正确,且表达不清晰。需要简化句子,去掉多余词汇,使句子通顺。
× I prefer to make a list on your on my phone 'cause I think it's convenient.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's convenient.
这里错误地使用了 'your',应使用第一人称所有格 'my',以保持主语和所有格一致。