List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时可以使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list that includes the items I want and their price ranges. This helps me shop more efficiently and avoid overspending.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，减少口头语，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for work because I have many tasks. If I don't, I sometimes forget important ones. Listing my tasks for the next few days helps me stay organized and ensures nothing is missed.

Gợi ý: 回答中有词汇错误（lakes应为lists），语法和表达不够准确，建议加强词汇准确性和句子结构，避免重复，使用连接词提升逻辑性。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted and prefer to be spontaneous. Also, making lists can sometimes cause stress, which discourages them from using this method.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够自然，建议注意主谓一致和时态，使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使理由更清晰。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I often lose paper lists. Also, my phone reminds me of deadlines, which makes it very efficient for managing my work.

× If I do not make a list, I will sometimes forgot some important tasks.

✓ If I do not make a list, I will sometimes forget some important tasks.

这里的动词应该用原形forget，因为will后面接动词原形。原句中使用了过去式forgot，时态错误。

× It avoids me to forget my important task.

✓ It helps me avoid forgetting my important tasks.

avoid后面应接动名词形式，且句子结构应调整为help sb do sth。原句中使用了不正确的结构，且task应为复数tasks。

× Well I think they might think making lakes will make them feels they are restricted and they would like to do things out of the list and also making this will make them feel stressful.

✓ Well, I think they might think making lists will make them feel they are restricted, and they would like to do things outside the list. Also, making lists will make them feel stressed.

原句中makes和feels主谓不一致，应为make和feel； lakes应为lists；'do things out of the list'表达不准确，应为 'do things outside the list'；'make them feel stressful'应为 'make them feel stressed'。

× So I think they don't like making this because of these reasons.

✓ So I think they don't like making lists because of these reasons.

this指代不明确，应使用复数lists来指代前文提到的making lists。

× To be honest, I always make this on my phone because first, when I make a list on paper, sometimes I forget where the paper is, so it is useless.

✓ To be honest, I always make lists on my phone because, first, when I make a list on paper, sometimes I forget where the paper is, so it is useless.

this指代不明确，应使用复数lists来指代制作的清单。

× And the second reason is that making a list on the phone even notice me when the deadline is and it is very efficient for my work.

✓ And the second reason is that making a list on the phone even notifies me when the deadline is, and it is very efficient for my work.

主语making a list是第三人称单数，动词应为notifies而非notice。