List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达清晰且结构合理，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，例如使用“because”或“so”。此外，可以增加具体细节来丰富内容，比如举例说明你如何制定购物清单。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I wrote down all the ingredients for a recipe, so I didn't forget anything at the store.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达了观点，但句子结构较简单，且部分表达不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并增加连接词使内容更连贯，同时提供更具体的例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work every day because it helps me prioritize tasks. For instance, by following my list, I can complete assignments on time and maintain a balanced daily routine.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且用词较为简单。建议避免使用“lazy”这样可能带有负面评价的词汇，改用更中性表达，并注意语法正确性。

Ví dụ: Some people prefer not to make lists because they want to enjoy their free time without feeling restricted. They might find lists too organized and prefer a more relaxed approach to their tasks.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇和表达不够简洁的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式，同时可以增加具体原因说明。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better. Also, crossing off completed tasks gives me a sense of accomplishment.

× so they don't like to making lists.

✓ so they don't like to make lists.

动词不定式to后面应接动词原形，而不是动名词形式making。这里应使用to make。

× I prefer to make a list on the paper because when I write write down the things I need to do, this can let me remember them deeply and this can let me feel more formal and I can feel a sense of achievement when I finish them.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because when I write down the things I need to do, this can let me remember them deeply and this can let me feel more formal and I can feel a sense of achievement when I finish them.

在表达“在纸上”时，通常不加定冠词the，直接用on paper。加the paper会让句子显得不自然。