Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually do the shopping list before I go to the supermarket because the list can help me to remember what I need to buy and it can make me buy things very quickly and avoid me to buy other items that.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes. I usually do To Do List on work days because the list can help me organize times and my tasks very well. It always remind me about what I have done and what I need to do. I must say I can't work very well without the To Do List.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think it really depends on the poem. Some people don't like making to do lists because it takes much time for them and they will feel a bit stressful. For example they might for remember things instead of writing down.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I'd prefer to make To Do List on my phone because everything is digital and I can change the items in list everywhere every time and I don't need to write much vocabulary. It can save time for me.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时语句较长且有语法错误,表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并注意语法准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the supermarket because it helps me remember what I need and shop quickly without buying unnecessary items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中重复“yes”显得不自然,且部分表达有语法错误。建议直接回答问题,使用连贯的句子,并注意时态和单复数形式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a To-Do List on workdays because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time effectively. It reminds me of what I have completed and what still needs to be done.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了明显的词汇错误('poem'应为'person'),且表达不够清晰。建议注意词汇准确性,句子结构应更清楚,避免语法错误。
Ví dụ: I think it depends on the person. Some people dislike making lists because it takes time and makes them feel stressed. For example, they prefer to remember things rather than write them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但“write much vocabulary”表达不准确。建议使用更地道的表达,并注意句子流畅性。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make my To-Do List on my phone because it's digital, so I can update it anytime and anywhere. It also saves me time since I don't have to write everything by hand.
× Yes, I usually do the shopping list before I go to the supermarket because the list can help me to remember what I need to buy and it can make me buy things very quickly and avoid me to buy other items that.
✓ Yes, I usually make the shopping list before I go to the supermarket because the list can help me remember what I need to buy, and it can help me buy things very quickly and avoid buying other items.
动词短语中,'do the shopping list' 应改为 'make the shopping list',因为制作清单用动词 'make'。此外,'help me to remember' 中 'to' 可省略,'avoid me to buy' 应改为 'avoid buying',因为 'avoid' 后接动名词形式。
× I usually do To Do List on work days because the list can help me organize times and my tasks very well.
✓ I usually make a To Do List on work days because the list can help me organize my time and tasks very well.
'do To Do List' 应改为 'make a To Do List',因为制作清单用 'make'。'organize times' 应改为 'organize my time','time' 是不可数名词,且需要所有格。
× It always remind me about what I have done and what I need to do.
✓ It always reminds me about what I have done and what I need to do.
主语 'It' 是第三人称单数,谓语动词 'remind' 应加 -s 变为 'reminds',以保持主谓一致。
× I think it really depends on the poem.
✓ I think it really depends on the person.
'poem'(诗)与语境不符,应为 'person'(人),这是词汇使用错误。
× For example they might for remember things instead of writing down.
✓ For example, they might remember things instead of writing them down.
'might for remember' 结构错误,应为 'might remember'。'writing down' 后应加宾语 'them',完整表达写下什么。
× I'd prefer to make To Do List on my phone because everything is digital and I can change the items in list everywhere every time and I don't need to write much vocabulary.
✓ I'd prefer to make a To Do List on my phone because everything is digital, and I can change the items in the list anywhere, anytime, and I don't need to write many words.
'make To Do List' 应加冠词 'a'。'items in list' 应为 'items in the list',加定冠词。'everywhere every time' 改为更自然的 'anywhere, anytime'。'write much vocabulary' 应改为 'write many words','vocabulary' 不可数,且此处应用 'many' 修饰可数名词 'words'。