List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意时态和单复数，避免重复和冗长。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体理由支持。

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I enjoy browsing and choosing things spontaneously. I find it more relaxing to pick items as I see them rather than sticking to a fixed list.

Gợi ý: 回答内容清晰，但表达有些不自然，部分词汇使用不准确。建议使用更地道的表达，如“break down a big project into smaller tasks”，并注意句子连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to make lists for my work because they help me break down big projects into smaller tasks. This way, I can complete each step one by one, which makes me feel accomplished.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇表达原因，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because it can make them feel stressed. They have to keep checking what they have finished and what is still left, which might feel too strict for their lifestyle.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够流畅，部分词汇使用不当。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意句子连贯和语法正确。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I often lose paper lists. Since I always have my phone with me, I can check my lists anytime and anywhere easily.

× Actually I don't like to make a list because I enjoy the time that I wondering in the shop I can choose what I have seen right now and it's I think it's a comfort process.

✓ Actually I don't like to make a list because I enjoy the time that I am wandering in the shop; I can choose what I see right now and I think it's a comfortable process.

The verb 'wondering' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'wandering' (verb + -ing form) to express moving around. Also, 'I have seen' should be 'I see' to match the present tense context. 'Comfort' should be 'comfortable' as an adjective describing the process.

× So I don't want to make a list that make me stressful.

✓ So I don't want to make a list that makes me stressed.

The conjunction 'that' introduces a relative clause; the verb should agree with 'list' (singular), so 'make' should be 'makes' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'stressful' describes something causing stress, but the feeling is 'stressed'.

× Actually in work I really love to make a list.

✓ Actually at work I really love to make lists.

The phrase 'in work' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at work'. Also, 'a list' is singular, but generally people make multiple lists, so 'lists' is more natural here.

× It can help me to cut the bigger or the big project to the small 1 and I can finish them step by step.

✓ It can help me to break a big project into smaller parts and I can finish them step by step.

'Cut the bigger or the big project to the small 1' is incorrect. The phrase should be 'break a big project into smaller parts' to express dividing a project into manageable pieces.

× Things may be making a list may make them feel a little stressful and that means they have to check what one they have finished, what have still haven't done before.

✓ Making a list may make them feel a little stressed, and that means they have to check which tasks they have finished and which they still haven't done.

'Things may be making a list' is redundant and confusing. 'Feel a little stressful' is incorrect; it should be 'feel a little stressed'. 'What one they have finished' should be 'which tasks they have finished'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I prefer to use my phone because in paper I always would lose it.

✓ I prefer to use my phone because I always lose paper lists.

The phrase 'in paper' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on paper' or 'paper lists'. Also, 'would lose it' is awkward; 'always lose' is more natural here.

× I just forget about the exact location and inform I can check them whenever I want because in my daily life I really holding my phone on my hands.

✓ I just forget the exact location, but I can check them whenever I want because in my daily life I am always holding my phone in my hands.

The sentence is run-on and unclear. 'Forget about the exact location and inform' is incorrect; 'but I can check them whenever I want' is clearer. 'I really holding' should be 'I am always holding'. 'On my hands' should be 'in my hands'.