List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repetition and incorrect word usage. For example, 'leash' should be 'list'. Also, make your sentences clearer and more concise by directly stating the benefit of making a list. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and ensures I buy everything I need without forgetting anything.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear sentence structure and grammar. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to explain how making a list helps you prioritize tasks effectively.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and prioritize them efficiently, which improves my productivity.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and repeated phrases. Use clear and concise language to express your opinion. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they believe it's unnecessary and trust their memory to remember everything without writing it down.

Gợi ý: Try to provide more specific reasons and use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Avoid vague statements like 'a cell phone is everything in your life.'

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily update or check my list anytime, which helps me stay organized throughout the day.

× I really like making a leash when I shop because it it helps my life easier and I can buy everything what I want.

✓ I really like making a list when I shop because it helps make my life easier and I can buy everything I want.

The word 'leash' is incorrect; it should be 'list' (singular). Also, 'everything what I want' is incorrect; 'what' should be omitted. The phrase 'helps my life easier' is incorrect; it should be 'helps make my life easier' to convey the intended meaning.

× It is really work.

✓ It really works.

The phrase 'It is really work' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'It really works' to indicate that something functions or is effective.

× It helps me can organize what. The priority?

✓ It helps me organize what the priorities are.

The original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence properly structures the idea that the list helps organize priorities.

× they think it is not necessary for make a list, for making a list.

✓ they think it is not necessary to make a list.

The phrase 'for make a list' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to make a list' after 'necessary'. The phrase 'for making a list' is redundant and unnecessary here.

× I think I believe that they believe that they can remember everything. What?

✓ I believe they think they can remember everything.

The sentence is repetitive and includes an unnecessary 'What?'. Simplifying the sentence improves clarity and correctness.