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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes I do because I always shop when I need some necessary goods, so if I don't make a list I will buy something unnecessary.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

No I don't because I don't have work yet, but I usually make a list for my study because I think a list can make my schedule clear and it tells me what should I do every day.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Maybe some people prefer a flexible lifestyle and don't want to be restricted by strict plans. Although they might feel anxious if they cannot complete all the tasks on their list, so they avoid making lists to reduce stress.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I almost use my phone every day every time so it can remind me. What should I do?

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但句子结构较为简单,且有些重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式,避免重复“shop”和“list”,并且可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to ensure I only buy the essentials. This helps me avoid purchasing unnecessary items and saves both time and money.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答较完整,但句子连接不够流畅,且有语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯,同时注意语法,如疑问句的语序。

Ví dụ: I don't have a job yet, so I don't make work-related lists. However, I often create study lists because they help me organize my schedule and remind me of daily tasks.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,表达了原因和结果,但句子结构稍显复杂且有些冗长。建议简化句子结构,使用更自然的连接词,使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility and don't want to be bound by strict plans. They might also avoid lists to reduce stress if they worry about unfinished tasks.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中出现了不相关的疑问句,影响了表达的自然性。建议去掉无关内容,使用更准确的表达,并说明手机列表的具体优点。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I use it constantly, and it can send me reminders to keep me on track.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× ...and it tells me what should I do every day.

...and it tells me what I should do every day.

在宾语从句中,疑问词后面应使用陈述语序,即主语在谓语之前。原句中“what should I do”是疑问语序,应该改为陈述语序“what I should do”。

Sentence structure errors

× Although they might feel anxious if they cannot complete all the tasks on their list, so they avoid making lists to reduce stress.

Although they might feel anxious if they cannot complete all the tasks on their list, they avoid making lists to reduce stress.

句子中“Although”和“so”同时使用导致结构混乱,应去掉“so”使句子结构完整且逻辑通顺。

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