List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some unnatural phrases and unclear words such as 'cargoes' and 'on the victim'. Try to use more natural vocabulary like 'items' or 'things' and clarify your meaning. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'I write the list' twice. Keep your answer concise and clear.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list. Sometimes I write it down on paper, and other times I use a shopping app on my phone to keep track of the items I need to buy.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct sentence structures and clearer expressions. For example, say 'making a list helps me work more efficiently' instead of 'make list for my work can make me work more quickly'. Also, provide a linking word to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes make lists for my work because they help me to be more organised and efficient. For example, I write down important tasks to ensure I don't forget anything.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and directly. For example, explain that some people find making lists inconvenient or time-consuming. Avoid asking questions back to the examiner. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient and time-consuming. They may prefer to remember things without writing them down.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Use correct comparative structures and vocabulary. For example, say 'Compared to writing lists on paper, I prefer using my phone because it is more convenient.' Also, avoid informal phrases like 'you know' in formal speaking.

Ví dụ: Compared to writing lists on paper, I prefer to use my phone because it is more convenient. Sometimes I don't have a pen or paper with me, so using an app makes it easier to keep track of my shopping list.

× Sometimes I write the list and what cargoes I need to buy on a papers and sometimes I write a lot on the application on my phone or on the victim.

✓ Sometimes I write the list and what cargo I need to buy on paper and sometimes I write a lot on the application on my phone or on the victim.

The word 'cargoes' is incorrect here; 'cargo' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralised. Also, 'papers' should be singular 'paper' when referring to material used for writing. Using the correct singular or uncountable form improves grammatical accuracy.

× Sometimes I write the list and what cargoes I need to buy on a papers and sometimes I write a lot on the application on my phone or on the victim.

✓ Sometimes I write the list and what cargo I need to buy on paper and sometimes I write a lot on the application on my phone or on the victim.

The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'paper' and 'application', but 'a papers' is incorrect; 'a' should not be used with plural nouns. Also, 'on the victim' is unclear and likely incorrect; it may be a mishearing or typo.

× Sometimes I write the list and what cargoes I need to buy on a papers and sometimes I write a lot on the application on my phone or on the victim.

✓ Sometimes I write the list and what cargo I need to buy on paper and sometimes I write a lot on the application on my phone or on the device.

The phrase 'on the victim' is likely a mispronunciation or error; 'device' fits the context better. Correcting this improves sentence clarity and structure.

× I think sometimes make list for my work can make me work more quickly, more efficiently and more perfectly.

✓ I think sometimes making a list for my work can help me work more quickly, more efficiently and more perfectly.

The phrase 'make list' is incorrect; the gerund form 'making a list' is needed here. Also, adding 'help me' clarifies the sentence structure and meaning.

× I have some important things I think I most to write on the list.

✓ I have some important things I think I must write on the list.

The phrase 'I most to write' is incorrect; the modal verb 'must' should be used to express necessity. This correction improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Oh, I think they felt not very convenient because if they make that list, they will spend much time to consult.

✓ Oh, I think they feel it is not very convenient because if they make that list, they will spend much time consulting.

The verb tense 'felt' should be present 'feel' to match the context. Also, 'not very convenient' needs a subject 'it is' for clarity. 'Spend much time to consult' should be 'spend much time consulting' for correct verb form.

× Oh, I think they felt not very convenient because if they make that list, they will spend much time to consult.

✓ Oh, I think they feel it is not very convenient because if they make that list, they will spend much time consulting.

The preposition 'to' before 'consult' is incorrect; the gerund form 'consulting' should be used after 'spend time'. This correction improves grammatical correctness.

× Compare with write on a list on papers.

✓ Compared with writing a list on paper,

The phrase 'Compare with write' is incorrect; it should be 'Compared with writing' to function as a correct comparative phrase. Also, 'on papers' should be 'on paper' as an uncountable noun.

× Compare with write on a list on papers.

✓ Compared with writing a list on paper,

The preposition 'with' is correct, but the verb form and article usage are incorrect. Using 'writing' and 'paper' corrects the phrase.

× I prefer to make the list on my front because it's more convenient and you know, sometimes I don't have plans or pencils.

✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone because it's more convenient and, you know, sometimes I don't have pens or pencils.

The word 'front' is incorrect; it should be 'phone' to match the context. Also, 'plans' is likely a mishearing of 'pens'. Correct pronouns and nouns improve clarity.