Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I will make a list before I go shop. I think this will make me more effective to get what important things I want. So I will make a list before I get the shop.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I will make a list before I doing my job because I think that is a very effective way to help me the important things what I must do and this way also help me a saving.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Maybe I think they are. They are attractive people and they think make a list well limited their creativity.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on paper because I think the feeling of writing papers and on writing on papers make me feel relaxable. So I like make a list on paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但语法和用词不够准确,句子结构重复,缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意动词时态和介词的正确使用,避免重复表达,并尝试使用连接词使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember the important items I need. This way, I can shop more efficiently and avoid forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如动词形式和句子结构不完整,表达不够清晰。建议练习正确使用动词时态和句型,明确表达观点,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before starting my work because it helps me focus on the important tasks I must complete. This method also saves me time and increases my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,句子结构混乱,表达含糊。建议明确表达观点,使用完整句子,并解释原因,避免模糊和不连贯的表达。
Ví dụ: Some people may dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their creativity and spontaneity. They prefer to work more freely without strict plans.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达,词汇使用不准确。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配,避免重复,并尝试用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me feel more relaxed and focused. It also makes the process more enjoyable for me.
× Yes, I will make a list before I go shop.
✓ Yes, I will make a list before I go shopping.
这里的动词短语应该使用动名词形式,表示动作的进行,go后面接动名词shopping,而不是动词原形shop。
× I think this will make me more effective to get what important things I want.
✓ I think this will help me get the important things I want more effectively.
短语中“make me more effective to get”用法不当,应该用help sb do sth结构,且形容词effective应改为副词effectively修饰动词get。
× So I will make a list before I get the shop.
✓ So I will make a list before I go shopping.
“get the shop”表达不正确,应该用go shopping表示去购物。
× Yes, I will make a list before I doing my job because I think that is a very effective way to help me the important things what I must do and this way also help me a saving.
✓ Yes, I will make a list before I do my job because I think that is a very effective way to help me with the important things I must do, and this way also helps me save.
“before I doing”应为“before I do”,动词前不能直接加doing。help后面需要加介词with来引出宾语。句子中“help me a saving”表达不正确,应改为“helps me save”。
× Maybe I think they are.
✓ Maybe I think they don't like it.
原句不完整,缺少谓语和宾语,导致句意不明。应补充完整表达。
× They are attractive people and they think make a list well limited their creativity.
✓ They are attractive people and they think making a list limits their creativity.
“think make a list well limited”结构混乱,应改为“think making a list limits”,使句子结构完整且语法正确。
× I prefer to make a list on paper because I think the feeling of writing papers and on writing on papers make me feel relaxable.
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I think the feeling of writing on paper makes me feel relaxed.
“writing papers and on writing on papers”重复且用法错误,应为“writing on paper”。“relaxable”不是正确形容词,应使用“relaxed”。
× So I like make a list on paper.
✓ So I like to make a list on paper.
“like make”应为“like to make”或“like making”,动词后需加不定式或动名词形式。