Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Normally I don't make any list in the shop because I think it's inconvenient, but when I need to buy many things or prepare for something important, I tend to make a list to stay organized and help me shop more effectively.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I used to make a list for my work in the past, but now I don't make any list because I'm too lazy and I couldn't follow my To Do List in time. I think that making lists which makes me feel tired and stressful.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Well, if some people don't like making notes, chances are they're too lazy just like me. Another reason I think that is making list requires more time and energy. But in nowadays most people have no time and energies to making list.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Normally I prefer to make a list on paper because I like paper and this filling. But when I have something very urgent to do and I will make a list on my mobile phone because I can use lots of apps on it and it's so convenient.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但句子结构较为简单,且部分表达不够自然,例如“make any list in the shop”可以改为“make a shopping list”。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: I usually don't make a shopping list because I find it inconvenient. However, when I have to buy many items or prepare for an important event, I tend to make a list to stay organized and shop more efficiently.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够连贯的问题,如“making lists which makes me feel tired”应为“making lists makes me feel tired”。建议注意主谓一致,使用连接词使表达更连贯,同时避免重复和冗余。
Ví dụ: I used to make lists for my work, but now I don't because I find it hard to follow them on time. Moreover, making lists sometimes makes me feel tired and stressed.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当,如“making list”应为“making lists”,“in nowadays”应为“nowadays”。建议加强语法基础,使用正确的词汇和短语,并用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they might be too lazy, like me. Also, making lists requires time and energy, which many people nowadays don't have.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但“this filling”应为“this feeling”,且句子结构可以更自然。建议注意拼写错误,使用更自然的表达,并用连接词连接句子。
Ví dụ: I usually prefer making lists on paper because I like the feeling of writing by hand. However, if something urgent comes up, I use my phone to make a list since there are many convenient apps available.
× Normally I don't make any list in the shop because I think it's inconvenient, but when I need to buy many things or prepare for something important, I tend to make a list to stay organized and help me shop more effectively.
✓ Normally I don't make any lists in the shop because I think it's inconvenient, but when I need to buy many things or prepare for something important, I tend to make a list to stay organized and help me shop more effectively.
“list”在这里表示可数名词,表示“清单”,当表示泛指时应使用复数形式“lists”。
× Yes, I used to make a list for my work in the past, but now I don't make any list because I'm too lazy and I couldn't follow my To Do List in time.
✓ Yes, I used to make lists for my work in the past, but now I don't make any lists because I'm too lazy and I couldn't follow my To Do List in time.
“list”作为可数名词,表示多次制作的清单时应使用复数形式“lists”。
× I think that making lists which makes me feel tired and stressful.
✓ I think that making lists makes me feel tired and stressed.
“which makes me feel tired and stressful”结构不完整且不通顺,应直接用“makes me feel tired and stressed”表达感受。
× Well, if some people don't like making notes, chances are they're too lazy just like me. Another reason I think that is making list requires more time and energy.
✓ Well, if some people don't like making notes, chances are they're too lazy just like me. Another reason I think that is making lists requires more time and energy.
“list”作为可数名词,泛指制作清单时应使用复数形式“lists”。
× But in nowadays most people have no time and energies to making list.
✓ But nowadays most people have no time and energy to make lists.
“in nowadays”错误,正确用法是“nowadays”;“energies”应为不可数名词“energy”;“to making list”应为不定式“to make lists”。
× But in nowadays most people have no time and energies to making list.
✓ But nowadays most people have no time and energy to make lists.
“list”应为复数形式“lists”,表示泛指多次制作的清单。
× Normally I prefer to make a list on paper because I like paper and this filling.
✓ Normally I prefer to make a list on paper because I like paper and this feeling.
“filling”是“填充”的意思,正确词应为“feeling”,表示感觉。