Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
A list when you shop? Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping. It helps me stay organized and ensures that I don't forget any important items.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a detailed To Do List to organize my tasks. This helps me stay focused and ensures that I don't forget anything important. For example, when I have a multiple deadlines, the list allows me to prioritize my work and manage my time more effectively.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think some people don't like making lists because they're very efficient at organizing their tasks in their minds. For example, they might have an excellent memory, so they don't feel the need to write things down. Also, some people find less restrictive and prefer to handle tasks more flexibly.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easy to carry around and I can access it anytime whether I'm at home or outside. For example, if I suddenly remember something I need to buy, I can quickly add it to my list without needing a pen and paper. This makes it much more practical than using a paper list.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 你的回答自然且直接,但可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容,比如说明你通常会列哪些类型的物品。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping. For example, I list groceries like vegetables and dairy products to make sure I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,内容具体。可以稍微调整语法,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a detailed To Do List to organize my tasks. This helps me stay focused and ensures I don't forget anything important. For example, when I have multiple deadlines, the list helps me prioritize my work and manage my time more effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题,建议注意句子完整性和准确表达。
Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they are good at organizing tasks in their minds. For example, they might have an excellent memory and don't feel the need to write things down. Also, some people find lists too restrictive and prefer to handle tasks more flexibly.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且连贯,可以尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easy to carry around and I can access it anytime, whether I'm at home or outside. For example, if I suddenly remember something I need to buy, I can quickly add it to my list without needing a pen and paper, which makes it much more practical than using a paper list.
× For example, when I have a multiple deadlines, the list allows me to prioritize my work and manage my time more effectively.
✓ For example, when I have multiple deadlines, the list allows me to prioritize my work and manage my time more effectively.
这里的错误是“a multiple deadlines”中“multiple”是复数形容词,不需要冠词“a”。正确用法是直接使用“multiple deadlines”。
× Also, some people find less restrictive and prefer to handle tasks more flexibly.
✓ Also, some people find it less restrictive and prefer to handle tasks more flexibly.
句子缺少宾语“it”,导致结构不完整。应补充“it”使句子完整,表达清晰。