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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. I often make a list when I'm shopping and it will help me to include all the things I want to buy so that I can have a clear plan where I should go 1st and which one I should buy first. It helps me to shop more efficiently.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. I often make A to do list in the morning and I will make a detailed schedule for my work and it really works because I can do things one by one according to my list so that I can finish work before the deadline approach and it is really efficient.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Because they think making list and the list will bound them so that they can't set their time freely and they think the list sometimes will depress their creativity and their freedom to manage their time.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I usually take my everywhere so whenever I was like chatting, sending message or doing things on my phone, I can see my list and this really reminds me what to do next and it helps me to get plan for all day and I can do things efficiently.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答内容完整且表达了观点,但句子结构较为简单,且有些表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式,并注意句子连贯性,例如使用连接词来使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it allows me to plan the order of my shopping, so I can buy items efficiently without forgetting anything.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意冠词的使用(如“a to-do list”),并使用更自然的表达方式,同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a to-do list every morning and create a detailed schedule. This method works well because I can complete tasks one by one, which helps me finish my work before the deadline efficiently.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议改进句子结构,使用正确的词汇(如“bind”而非“bound”),并使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel lists bind them and restrict their freedom to manage time. They also believe that lists can limit creativity and flexibility.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意代词使用(如“take it everywhere”),时态一致性,并简化句子结构,使表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. Whenever I'm chatting or sending messages, I can check my list, which reminds me of my tasks and helps me plan my day efficiently.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the past participle form

× I often make A to do list in the morning and I will make a detailed schedule for my work and it really works because I can do things one by one according to my list so that I can finish work before the deadline approach and it is really efficient.

I often make a to-do list in the morning and I will make a detailed schedule for my work and it really works because I can do things one by one according to my list so that I can finish work before the deadline approaches and it is really efficient.

The verb 'approach' should be in the third person singular present tense 'approaches' to agree with the singular subject 'deadline'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue, which falls under grammar problem type 27. The correction ensures the verb matches the singular subject in number.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I usually take my everywhere so whenever I was like chatting, sending message or doing things on my phone, I can see my list and this really reminds me what to do next and it helps me to get plan for all day and I can do things efficiently.

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I usually take it everywhere so whenever I am chatting, sending messages or doing things on my phone, I can see my list and this really reminds me what to do next and it helps me to plan for the whole day and I can do things efficiently.

The phrase 'take my everywhere' is incorrect; it should be 'take it everywhere' because 'it' refers to the phone. Also, 'was like chatting' should be 'am chatting' to match the present continuous tense. 'Sending message' should be plural 'sending messages'. 'Get plan for all day' is incorrect; it should be 'plan for the whole day'. These are preposition and verb form errors that affect clarity and grammatical correctness.

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