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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, for sure, because the list can make sure that I won't forget to buy something.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Definitely yes, because the list can make sure that I won't forget any works and it will increase my work efficiency and I also arrange my schedule based on the urgency of the work.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Maybe I think those people have a really good ability to arrange their work and maybe they think when they face the unexpected events it will interrupt their plans so they won't make a list.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think make the list on my is more convenient because I take my every time and everywhere. If I make a list on the paper, I will take a paper extract. So I think make a list on my phone is more convenient.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为简洁,但表达略显重复,建议避免使用“make sure”两次,且可以增加具体细节使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need and saves time at the store.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“any works”应为“any work”,且句子较长,建议分句表达并使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work. It helps me remember all my tasks and improves my efficiency because I prioritize them based on urgency.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中“Maybe I think”重复且不自然,建议直接表达观点,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Some people might not like making lists because they are confident in managing their tasks mentally, and they worry that unexpected events could disrupt their plans.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,如“take my every time and everywhere”不完整,建议简化句子并注意语法准确。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient; I always have my phone with me, unlike paper lists which I might forget or lose.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× ...I won't forget any works...

...I won't forget any work...

“work”作为不可数名词时,表示工作内容,不需要加复数形式“works”。这里用复数形式不正确,应使用不可数名词形式。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× ...I also arrange my schedule based on the urgency of the work.

...I also arrange my schedule according to the urgency of the work.

“arrange my schedule based on”表达不够地道,通常用“arrange my schedule according to”表示“根据……安排”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× ...because I think make the list on my is more convenient because I take my every time and everywhere.

...because I think making the list on my phone is more convenient because I take it with me every time and everywhere.

句中缺少“phone”作为名词,且“make the list on my”不完整,应补充完整。代词“it”用来指代“list”,需要加上。

Verb + -ing form

× ...because I think make the list on my is more convenient...

...because I think making the list on my phone is more convenient...

动词“think”后面接动名词“making”表示“认为做某事”,而不是不定式或原形动词。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× ...If I make a list on the paper, I will take a paper extract.

...If I make a list on paper, I will take a paper copy.

“on the paper”应改为“on paper”,表示用纸写。且“paper extract”表达不准确,通常用“paper copy”表示纸质副本。

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