Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I make a list when I shop because I often forget I need to buy something.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I write a letter for my study. I think it does work because it it has it has make a make plan for me to for me to. Finish my.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people don't like making this because they has a they have a good memory or have have a good.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Yes, I prefer to make a list on paper because I think paper I need to write maybe, maybe convenient and.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简单,缺少细节和连贯性。建议在回答中加入更多具体原因和细节,并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I tend to forget items easily. For example, last week I forgot to buy milk when I didn't have a list, so making one helps me stay organized and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,语法和表达有明显错误。建议直接回答问题,使用完整句子,并说明清楚列表如何帮助工作或学习。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. For instance, by listing my assignments, I can prioritize and complete them efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。建议完整表达观点,说明原因并举例,使用连接词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and prefer to remember things mentally. For example, my friend rarely writes lists but still manages to keep track of her tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清。建议明确表达偏好,说明原因并举例,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember better. Also, paper lists are easy to access without needing a phone or battery.
× I think it does work because it it has it has make a make plan for me to for me to. Finish my.
✓ I think it does work because it helps me make a plan to finish my work.
原句中存在重复和不完整的表达,且动词形式错误。'has make' 应改为 'helps me make',表示帮助做计划。建议简化句子结构,使表达更清晰。
× Some people don't like making this because they has a they have a good memory or have have a good.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory.
原句中 'they has' 主谓不一致,应改为 'they have'。此外,句子中有重复和不完整部分,需删去多余词汇,保持句子完整。
× Yes, I prefer to make a list on paper because I think paper I need to write maybe, maybe convenient and.
✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list on paper because I think writing on paper is maybe more convenient.
原句结构混乱,缺少谓语和完整表达。应调整句子结构,补充缺失部分,使句子通顺完整。