List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct tense and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise and clear by limiting to 3-4 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay focused on what I need to buy. This way, I shop faster and avoid forgetting important items.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use singular/plural forms correctly and add linking words to improve flow. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'productive day' without context.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a list for my studies because it helps me stay organized and focus on each task. As a result, I can complete my work on time, which makes my day more productive.

Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammar errors and unclear phrasing. Avoid repeating words and use correct verb tenses. Also, try to provide more specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time. Additionally, they may feel they can remember their tasks without writing them down.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your preference clearly and explain your reasons with specific details. Avoid confusing phrases and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better. Also, I can easily carry the list with me when shopping or studying, which keeps me focused.

× I think making a list when shopping is really essential because it helped me stay focused on what things that I need to do, need to buy and help me fast and buy proper.

✓ I think making a list when shopping is really essential because it helps me stay focused on the things that I need to do, need to buy, and helps me shop quickly and properly.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'helped' when the present tense 'helps' is appropriate to describe a habitual action. Also, 'help me fast and buy proper' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'helps me shop quickly and properly' to use correct adverbs and verb forms.

× I think making a list when shopping is really essential because it helped me stay focused on what things that I need to do, need to buy and help me fast and buy proper.

✓ I think making a list when shopping is really essential because it helps me stay focused on the things that I need to do, need to buy, and helps me shop quickly and properly.

The phrase 'what things that I need to do' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'the things that I need to do' to correctly use plural form and proper article.

× I think making a list when shopping is really essential because it helped me stay focused on what things that I need to do, need to buy and help me fast and buy proper.

✓ I think making a list when shopping is really essential because it helps me stay focused on the things that I need to do, need to buy, and helps me shop quickly and properly.

The conjunction 'and' is used to connect verbs and phrases; the original sentence lacks parallel structure and proper conjunction use. The corrected sentence uses 'and' to connect parallel verbs 'need to do', 'need to buy', and 'helps me shop'.

× Well, I often make a list for my studying because it helps me stay organized and focus on my task and I can finish it on time.

✓ Well, I often make a list for my studying because it helps me stay organized and focus on my tasks, and I can finish them on time.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with the context of multiple tasks, and the pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer to the plural 'tasks'.

× It's really efficient and important to me for productive day.

✓ It's really efficient and important to me for a productive day.

The phrase 'productive day' requires the indefinite article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× Well on my opinion I think they didn't like making making this because they think it is waste their time and they can't remember all things they want to do in a day so they don't want to make a list.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I think they don't like making this because they think it wastes their time and they can't remember all the things they want to do in a day, so they don't want to make a list.

The phrase 'on my opinion' should be 'in my opinion' as 'in' is the correct preposition. Also, 'didn't like' is changed to 'don't like' to maintain present tense. 'It is waste their time' is incorrect; it should be 'it wastes their time' to use the correct verb form. 'All things' should be 'all the things' for proper article usage.

× Well on my opinion I think they didn't like making making this because they think it is waste their time and they can't remember all things they want to do in a day so they don't want to make a list.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I think they don't like making this because they think it wastes their time and they can't remember all the things they want to do in a day, so they don't want to make a list.

The pronoun 'they' is used correctly, but the verb forms and articles around it were incorrect. The correction ensures pronoun-verb agreement and proper article usage.

× Well, I prefer making a list on paper because it is not only a good habit for me to write down it and bring it to buy items or doing tests.

✓ Well, I prefer making a list on paper because it is not only a good habit for me to write it down and bring it to buy items or do tests.

The phrase 'write down it' is incorrect; the correct form is 'write it down' because the pronoun should come before the particle 'down'. Also, 'doing tests' should be 'do tests' to maintain parallel verb structure.

× Well, I prefer making a list on paper because it is not only a good habit for me to write down it and bring it to buy items or doing tests.

✓ Well, I prefer making a list on paper because it is not only a good habit for me to write it down and bring it to buy items or do tests.

The pronoun 'it' is misplaced in 'write down it'; it should be 'write it down' to follow correct English syntax.

× I think right on point can make me distract.

✓ I think being precise can help me avoid distractions.

The phrase 'right on point can make me distract' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Distract' is a verb that requires an object; the corrected sentence uses 'being precise' and 'help me avoid distractions' to convey the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.