List— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping. It helps me stay organised and ensure that I don't forget anything that I should buy. It can also help me save time so that I won't spend too much time in the supermarket.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list for my work to ensure what I should do on that day. It definitely works because it helps me prioritise my duties and manage my time more efficiently. For example, when I have a busy day, it keeps me focused and reduces my stress.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and can bring them pressure. In addition, some may feel that it's unnecessary to make a list because they prefer to do something what they won't do instead of what they should do at that time it will limited for their creative progress.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make list on paper because it's more memorable and I can put the paper in a very obvious place. When I finish a task, I can cross it off, which gives me a sense of accomplishment. In addition, making lists on paper can avoid dependence on phones and better control on my own arrangements.
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Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 你的回答整体流畅且内容完整，但可以使用更多连接词使句子之间更连贯，例如使用“because”或“so”。此外，避免重复表达“help me”可以使语言更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organised and ensures I don't forget anything important. This way, I can save time and avoid wandering around the supermarket unnecessarily.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，但可以增加更多连接词如“therefore”或“as a result”来增强逻辑性。同时，注意句子表达的自然性，例如“ensure what I should do”可以改为“ensure I know what I should do”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work to ensure I know what tasks I need to complete that day. It definitely works because it helps me prioritise my duties and manage my time more efficiently. For example, when I have a busy day, it keeps me focused and reduces my stress.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，避免复杂表达，使用更准确的词汇和句式。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it is restrictive and causes pressure. Also, they may think lists limit their creativity since they prefer to do things spontaneously rather than following a fixed plan.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 88.0Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富且表达清晰，但可以使用更多连接词如“also”或“furthermore”来增强句子间的连贯性。注意冠词使用，如“make a list”。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on paper because it's more memorable, and I can place it somewhere obvious. Also, crossing off completed tasks gives me a sense of accomplishment. Furthermore, using paper helps me avoid depending on my phone and better control my schedule.
Ngữ pháp
× Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and can bring them pressure.
✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and it can bring them pressure.
这里缺少主语，导致句子结构不完整。'can bring them pressure'前应加主语'it'，使句子完整。
× In addition, some may feel that it's unnecessary to make a list because they prefer to do something what they won't do instead of what they should do at that time it will limited for their creative progress.
✓ In addition, some may feel that it's unnecessary to make a list because they prefer to do something they won't do instead of what they should do at that time; it will limit their creative progress.
句中'what they won't do'应改为'they won't do'，去掉多余的'what'。另外，'it will limited'中'limited'应为动词原形'limit'，因为前面有情态动词'will'。句子过长，建议用分号分开。
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