List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“stuffs”应为“items”或“things”，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，使用更准确的词汇，并注意时态一致。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list. It helps me remember the items I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary things influenced by supermarket promotions.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，难以理解。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并用具体例子说明。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work. It works well when my goals are clear and the tasks are realistic.

Gợi ý: 回答重复且语法错误严重，表达不连贯。建议用简洁的句子表达观点，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇。

Ví dụ: I think some people prefer to rely on their memory instead of making lists because they trust themselves to remember everything.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“fun”应为“phone”，句子不够流畅。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and helps me keep track of my tasks for today and tomorrow.

× First of all it helped me to make clear that the stuffs I need to buy and secondly it helps me to not tempt by the marketing ways of the supermarket.

✓ First of all, it helped me to make clear the stuff I need to buy, and secondly, it helps me not to be tempted by the marketing ways of the supermarket.

“stuffs”是不可数名词“stuff”的错误复数形式，应使用单数形式。

× it helps me to not tempt by the marketing ways of the supermarket.

✓ it helps me not to be tempted by the marketing ways of the supermarket.

“tempt”是主动动词，句中应使用被动语态“be tempted”，且“helps me not to be tempted”更符合表达习惯。

× A list is a must to my work, but whether it works it depends on the points that the goals or the ways are reasonable to task and it has the situation to to take it real.

✓ A list is a must for my work, but whether it works depends on whether the goals or the methods are reasonable for the task and if the situation allows it to be taken seriously.

句子结构混乱，介词使用错误，“must to my work”应为“must for my work”，句意不清，需调整句子结构使表达更通顺。

× A list is a must to my work

✓ A list is a must for my work

“must”后面应接介词“for”表示“对……来说是必须的”，而非“to”。

× I think they tend to not rely on the true things or rather than rather than trust the things they left on the brain on the brain.

✓ I think they tend not to rely on real things, but rather trust the things they keep in their brain.

“left on the brain”表达不当，应为“keep in their brain”，且重复“rather than”错误，应删除多余部分。

× I think they tend to not rely on the true things or rather than rather than trust the things they left on the brain on the brain.

✓ I think they tend not to rely on real things, but rather trust the things they keep in their brain.

“the true things”表达不自然，改为“real things”更合适；“left on the brain”应改为“keep in their brain”，且重复部分需删除。

× I prefer to make lists on the phone many because it is more convenient for me to know the task that I need to do today or tomorrow.

✓ I prefer to make lists on the phone mainly because it is more convenient for me to know the tasks that I need to do today or tomorrow.

“many”用法错误，应为“mainly”表示“主要地”；“task”应为复数“tasks”，因为指多个任务。

× Because the fun is is very intelligent, it helps me to record my record my task.

✓ Because the function is very intelligent, it helps me to record my tasks.

“fun”应为“function”，且“record my record my task”重复，应删除重复部分；“task”应为复数“tasks”。