Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because they will feel sad.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
IPhone the iPhone yes, because have more or less.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺乏细节和解释。建议在回答时给出原因或补充信息,使回答更完整自然。
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,没有解释清楚是否有效。建议直接回答问题并补充说明效果如何。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且缺乏具体理由。建议给出更合理的原因并用连接词丰富表达。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom and makes them stressed about completing tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答不清晰且语法错误较多。建议明确表达偏好并给出具体原因,使用连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my iPhone because it's more convenient and I can easily edit or delete items.
× Because they will feel sad.
✓ Because they feel sad.
这里的原因状语从句描述的是一般事实或习惯,应使用一般现在时,而不是将来时。将来时“will feel”不符合语境。
× IPhone the iPhone yes, because have more or less.
✓ I prefer the iPhone because it has more or less features.
原句结构混乱,缺少主语和谓语,导致句子不完整。需要补充主语和谓语,使句子完整且符合语法。