Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I make a list to not to forget buying things.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I often make A to do list for my homework. It is very useful to check the tasks. Situation.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because maybe they don't know the list of importance of last. So if they know the meaning least importance of list, they will use list.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I think the both paper and on phone. Phone is good but my favorite list is a paper because I can see a task easier than my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 答えは直接的で簡潔ですが、文法的な誤りと自然な表現の不足があります。例えば、「to not to forget buying things」は不自然で、「so that I don't forget to buy things」のように言い換えると良いでしょう。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list so that I don't forget to buy anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 答えは質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。また、「Situation」の使い方が不明瞭です。より明確で自然な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いでしょう。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my homework because it helps me keep track of my tasks and manage my time effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 答えが不明瞭で文法的にも誤りがあります。理由を明確にし、自然な英語で説明することが必要です。接続詞を使って論理的に説明しましょう。
Ví dụ: Some people might not like making lists because they don't understand how to prioritize tasks, but if they learn to organize items by importance, they might find lists more useful.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 答えは意味が伝わりますが、文法と語順に改善の余地があります。より自然な表現と接続詞を使って、理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。
Ví dụ: I like both paper and phone lists, but I prefer paper because it's easier for me to see and check my tasks quickly.
× Yes, I make a list to not to forget buying things.
✓ Yes, I make a list so as not to forget buying things.
The phrase 'to not to forget' is incorrect because 'to' is repeated unnecessarily. The correct form is 'so as not to forget' or 'to avoid forgetting'. This is a common error involving the use of infinitive and gerund forms after expressions of purpose.
× Yeah, I often make A to do list for my homework.
✓ Yeah, I often make a to-do list for my homework.
The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' because it is in the middle of the sentence. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' because it is a compound noun.
× It is very useful to check the tasks. Situation.
✓ It is very useful to check the tasks and their situation.
The sentence 'It is very useful to check the tasks. Situation.' is fragmented and unclear. Combining the two parts into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Because maybe they don't know the list of importance of last.
✓ Because maybe they don't know the order of importance.
The phrase 'the list of importance of last' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'the order of importance' to indicate ranking or priority.
× So if they know the meaning least importance of list, they will use list.
✓ So if they know the meaning of least importance in a list, they will use a list.
The phrase 'meaning least importance of list' is incorrect. It should be 'meaning of least importance in a list'. Also, articles 'a' are needed before 'list'.
× I think the both paper and on phone.
✓ I think both paper and phone are useful.
The phrase 'the both paper and on phone' is incorrect. 'Both' does not need 'the', and 'on phone' should be 'phone'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.
× Phone is good but my favorite list is a paper because I can see a task easier than my phone.
✓ The phone is good, but my favorite list is on paper because I can see tasks more easily than on my phone.
'Phone' needs the definite article 'the'. 'A paper' should be 'on paper' to indicate medium. 'A task' should be plural 'tasks' to match general meaning. 'Easier' should be 'more easily' because it modifies the verb 'see'. Also, 'than my phone' should be 'than on my phone' for clarity.