List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are natural and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organised. For example, I plan what to buy in advance, so I don't forget anything important. This routine saves me time and reduces stress.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains some awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. Also, clarify terms like 'inertia' or replace them with more common words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me prioritise tasks. For instance, I list urgent tasks first and leave less important ones for later. This way, my schedule becomes clearer and more manageable.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to organise your points logically. Avoid vague phrases and explain your ideas with specific reasons.

Ví dụ: I believe some people dislike making lists because of their personality. For example, they prefer a more spontaneous lifestyle and feel restricted by plans. Despite this, they can still complete their tasks without a list.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains several errors. Focus on giving a clear preference with reasons, using linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid unnecessary words and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have it with me. In contrast, paper lists can be easily forgotten or lost, so using my phone helps me stay organised wherever I go.

× I always live out with all the plans and I need to follow the schedule what I listed and I will think it is my daily routine.

✓ I always live according to all the plans and I need to follow the schedule that I have listed, and I think it is my daily routine.

The phrase 'live out with all the plans' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'live according to all the plans'. Also, 'schedule what I listed' should be 'schedule that I have listed' to correctly use the relative pronoun and present perfect tense for a completed action relevant to the present.

× And I can separate that which is urgent, which is inertia.

✓ And I can separate what is urgent from what is not.

The pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used here; 'what' is more appropriate to refer to things in general. Also, 'which is inertia' is unclear and likely a misuse; it should be replaced with 'what is not' or 'what is less urgent' to clarify the meaning.

× I think it is because of their her personality because someone like to list out all the things but someone didn't.

✓ I think it is because of their personality; some people like to list out all the things but others don't.

The phrase 'their her personality' is redundant and incorrect; 'their personality' suffices. Also, 'someone like' should be 'some people like' to match plural subject with verb, and 'someone didn't' should be 'others don't' for correct pronoun and tense usage.

× They love freestyle in their life and although they don't listen something they also can finish in recording accordingly.

✓ They love to freestyle in their life, and although they don't write things down, they can still finish tasks accordingly.

The phrase 'don't listen something' is incorrect; it should be 'don't write things down' or 'don't make lists'. Also, 'finish in recording accordingly' is unclear and awkward; 'finish tasks accordingly' is clearer and more natural.

× Uh, yes, I do prefer to make a list on my phone because when I lease on the paper I don't think I will remember to take it out and besides our view and I must bring my go anywhere.

✓ Uh, yes, I do prefer to make a list on my phone because when I leave it on paper, I don't think I will remember to take it out, and besides, it's more convenient to carry my phone anywhere.

The phrase 'when I lease on the paper' is incorrect; it should be 'when I leave it on paper'. Also, 'besides our view and I must bring my go anywhere' is unclear and ungrammatical; it is corrected to 'besides, it's more convenient to carry my phone anywhere' to convey the intended meaning clearly.