List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use proper linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you used to make lists and why you stopped.

Ví dụ: I used to make shopping lists because I often forgot what I needed for my house. However, recently I have stopped making lists as I remember items more easily now.

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'make list' to 'make lists'.

Ví dụ: Currently, I make daily to-do lists for my work, which helps me complete tasks on time. In the past, I did not do this and faced difficulties, but now it has become a good habit.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete thoughts. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect reasons. Avoid vague phrases like 'consider it as their'.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it is embarrassing or think others might mock them for not remembering things well.

Gợi ý: Your answer is too long and ends abruptly. Use linking words to connect ideas and complete your sentences. Also, avoid redundancy like 'I have to note everything' and 'that remembers everything'.

Ví dụ: In the past, I made lists on paper, but now I prefer using a special app on my phone because it helps me remember everything easily.

× Recently I have stopped making lists for shopping. But yes, in past I usua I use.

✓ Recently I have stopped making lists for shopping. But yes, in the past I usually used to.

The phrase 'in past' is missing the definite article 'the' and 'usua I use' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'in the past I usually used to' to indicate habitual past action. This corrects the present tense usage and article usage.

× I usually use to make list for shopping items because I was unable to remember things that I need for my house.

✓ I usually used to make lists for shopping items because I was unable to remember things that I needed for my house.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances. Also, 'use to' should be 'used to' for past habitual action. 'Need' should be 'needed' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Well, as of now I make list for my work and To Do List what I have to do in that particular day and particular time.

✓ Well, as of now I make lists for my work and a To Do List of what I have to do on that particular day and at a particular time.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' to indicate plural or multiple lists. 'To Do List' needs an article 'a'. Also, 'what I have to do in that particular day' should be 'on that particular day' to use correct preposition.

× But then I had made my habit of making list and completing my tasks daily.

✓ But then I had developed the habit of making lists and completing my tasks daily.

'Had made my habit' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'had developed the habit'. Also, 'making list' should be 'making lists' for plural consistency.

× I think people are a bit stubborn and they consider it as their.

✓ I think people are a bit stubborn and they consider it as theirs.

The pronoun 'their' is possessive adjective and needs a noun after it. The correct pronoun here is 'theirs' which is possessive pronoun standing alone.

× We can say something like shame for them to make a list or I think they will think that others will make fun of them that they cannot remember anything or particularly about their work.

✓ We can say that making a list is shameful for them, or I think they believe others will make fun of them because they cannot remember anything, especially about their work.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. The correction improves sentence structure and clarity by properly connecting ideas and using correct expressions.

× I used to make lists for my work or for my stuff on paper in past, but now I do not carry any paper with me and I have to note everything in my mobile phone and I have a special app for that that remembers everything for me and it actually.

✓ I used to make lists for my work or for my stuff on paper in the past, but now I do not carry any paper with me and I note everything on my mobile phone. I have a special app that remembers everything for me and it works well.

'In past' should be 'in the past' with the definite article. 'Have to note' is better as 'note' to indicate current habit. The last part 'and it actually' is incomplete; it is corrected to 'and it works well' for clarity and completeness.