Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a shopping list before handing out and it keeps me focused and prevents impulse buyers.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, for work I maintain A to do list on my phone which helps me check deadlines and prioritize tasks. It works really well for keeping me organized.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think some people don't like this because they feel its limits, spontaneity or its pressures, but I find it's come coming to say everything. Layout. I prefer a digital list on my phone since I can easily record and travel items without losing a paper.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer digital list on my phone since I can easily record and check off items without losing the paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“handing out”应为“heading out”,且“impulse buyers”应为“impulse buying”。建议注意动词短语的正确使用,并避免词汇搭配错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list before heading out, and it helps me stay focused and prevents impulse buying.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但句子中“A to do list”中的冠词使用不当,应为“a to-do list”。建议注意冠词和连字符的正确使用,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, for work I maintain a to-do list on my phone, which helps me check deadlines and prioritize tasks. It works really well for keeping me organized.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在多处语法和表达错误,句子不连贯,影响理解。建议加强句子结构练习,确保表达清晰连贯,并使用恰当的词汇。
Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their spontaneity or adds pressure. However, I prefer using a digital list on my phone because I can easily add and check off items without worrying about losing paper.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但缺少冠词“a”,应为“I prefer a digital list”。建议注意冠词的使用,使表达更准确自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer a digital list on my phone since I can easily record and check off items without losing the paper.
× Yes, I always make a shopping list before handing out and it keeps me focused and prevents impulse buyers.
✓ Yes, I always make a shopping list before heading out and it keeps me focused and prevents impulse buying.
这里的错误是“handing out”应为“heading out”,另外“impulse buyers”应为“impulse buying”,因为这里指的是冲动购物行为,而不是冲动买家。购物行为是不可数名词,需用单数形式。
× Yes, for work I maintain A to do list on my phone which helps me check deadlines and prioritize tasks.
✓ Yes, for work I maintain a to-do list on my phone which helps me check deadlines and prioritize tasks.
“A to do list”中的“A”应为小写“a”,且“to do list”应加连字符变为“to-do list”,这是固定搭配。
× I prefer digital list on my phone since I can easily record and check off items without losing the paper.
✓ I prefer a digital list on my phone since I can easily record and check off items without losing the paper.
“digital list”前缺少冠词“a”,因为“list”是可数名词,单数形式前需要冠词。