Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Umm, actually I don't because umm, I am a paper. That means uh, if I want to do something before that I, I didn't plan anything. So in the shop I just hang out. Uh, uh, uh, if I found something I need I will buy it, if not I will go.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Uh, I will make a list for my work because umm, I think the list can help me to know what is the most important thing. I will first do that and what is nice important thing and I will do that after the more important thing so I will make a.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Actually I don't know because I am a person that like making list. I don't understand why they like they don't like making it, but I guess maybe they want to to work while thinking maybe.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think make list on my phone is more convenient than make a list on paper. And sometimes we don't have the paper and pen, but I take my phone every time, so it might more convenient, yeah.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在较多语气词和重复,表达不够清晰自然。建议减少填充词,直接回答问题,并用简洁的句子表达观点。
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. If I see something I need, I will buy it; otherwise, I just leave.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答未完整,表达不流畅且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子,清晰表达观点,并合理使用连接词。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks. I usually do the most important things first, then move on to less urgent ones.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且重复,缺乏具体理由。建议给出明确原因,并用连词连接句子,使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and rely on their memory instead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但句子结构简单且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的语法和丰富的词汇,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I always have my phone with me, so I can easily add or check items anytime, unlike paper lists which I might forget.
× Actually I don't know because I am a person that like making list.
✓ Actually I don't know because I am a person that likes making lists.
这里主语是单数的"person",谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"likes"。另外,"list"应使用复数形式"lists",因为泛指喜欢制作清单的行为。
× Actually I don't know because I am a person that like making list.
✓ Actually I don't know because I am a person that likes making lists.
主语是单数第三人称"person",谓语动词应加-s,变为"likes"。
× I think the list can help me to know what is the most important thing.
✓ I think the list can help me know what the most important things are.
"the most important thing"应改为复数形式"the most important things",因为通常有多个重要事项。
× I will first do that and what is nice important thing and I will do that after the more important thing so I will make a.
✓ I will first do that and then do the less important things after the more important things, so I will make a list.
句子中"nice important thing"表达不清,应改为"less important things",且保持复数形式。
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think make list on my phone is more convenient than make a list on paper.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think making a list on my phone is more convenient than making a list on paper.
动词"make"后应使用动名词形式"making",以符合句子结构。
× And sometimes we don't have the paper and pen, but I take my phone every time, so it might more convenient, yeah.
✓ And sometimes we don't have paper and pen, but I take my phone every time, so it might be more convenient, yeah.
"the paper and pen"中不需要定冠词"the",且缺少动词"be",应为"might be more convenient"。