Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because I can find what I want to buy immediately.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yet in my daily life like study or go traveling, I always write down a list for me and I think it have a big effect on my work.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because I think a lot of people. Feel difficult or lazy in making lists in their daily life?
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
As for me, I always write down the list on a paper because I can watch it easily. Also I can take a photo on it and I can use it on the phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答比较简短,缺少细节和连贯的连接词。建议在回答中加入更多具体细节,并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me find what I want quickly and avoid forgetting important items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型,并且直接回答问题,增加具体例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make lists for my studies and travel plans, which greatly improve my efficiency and help me stay organized.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误明显,表达不连贯。建议用完整句子回答问题,并解释原因,使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult or feel too lazy to organize their tasks regularly.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚,但用词和句式较简单,且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的表达和丰富词汇,句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer to write my lists on paper because it's easier to see and I can also take a photo of the list to access it on my phone later.
× Yet in my daily life like study or go traveling, I always write down a list for me and I think it have a big effect on my work.
✓ Yet in my daily life like study or go traveling, I always write down a list for me and I think it has a big effect on my work.
这里的主语是单数的"it",谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式"has",而不是"have"。这是主谓一致错误。建议记住第三人称单数动词变化规则。
× Because I think a lot of people. Feel difficult or lazy in making lists in their daily life?
✓ Because I think a lot of people feel difficult or lazy in making lists in their daily life.
原句中断句错误,"Because I think a lot of people."是一个不完整的句子,后面又用了疑问句形式,导致句子结构混乱。应将其合并为完整陈述句。建议注意句子完整性,避免断句错误。
× As for me, I always write down the list on a paper because I can watch it easily.
✓ As for me, I always write down the list on paper because I can watch it easily.
"on a paper"中的冠词"a"不合适,"paper"作为不可数名词时不需要冠词。应直接用"on paper"。建议学习不可数名词的用法,避免错误使用冠词。