Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I make a list when I shop because the list can help me remember don't forget the things I need to buy.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I make a list for my work because it can helps me remember the tasks I haven't completed. It helps me a lot.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because some people likes the casual life, they don't want to be controlled by their lists.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because if I want to add something I can edit it quickly.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了主要意思,但语法和表达不够自然,尤其是“remember don't forget”部分重复且不符合英语习惯。建议简化表达,避免重复,并使用更自然的句型。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember the things I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答基本清晰,但存在语法错误,如“can helps”应为“can help”。建议注意动词形式一致,同时可以用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember the tasks I haven't completed, and it is very useful.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较明显,如“likes”应为“like”,且句子结构不够连贯。建议使用连接词并调整句子结构,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer a casual lifestyle and don't want to feel controlled by their lists.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且表达清晰,但可以通过添加连接词使句子更连贯,同时丰富细节。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can quickly add or edit items whenever I need to, which is very convenient.
× Yes, I make a list when I shop because the list can help me remember don't forget the things I need to buy.
✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because the list can help me remember not to forget the things I need to buy.
原句中 'remember don't forget' 结构不正确,动词 'remember' 后应接动词不定式 'not to forget',表示记得不要忘记。应使用动词不定式形式来表达目的或意图。
× Yes, I make a list for my work because it can helps me remember the tasks I haven't completed.
✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it can help me remember the tasks I haven't completed.
主语 'it' 是第三人称单数,谓语动词 'help' 应该用原形 'help',因为情态动词 'can' 后面跟动词原形,不能加 's'。
× Because some people likes the casual life, they don't want to be controlled by their lists.
✓ Because some people like the casual life, they don't want to be controlled by their lists.
主语 'some people' 是复数,谓语动词 'like' 不应加 's'。动词与主语在人称和数上必须一致。