List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct pronouns and avoiding redundancy. For example, say "I don't go shopping very often" instead of "they don't go shopping very often." Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Ví dụ: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I don't go shopping very often. When I do, I try to remember what I need so I don't forget anything.

Gợi ý: Improve your answer by organizing your ideas clearly and using complete sentences. Use linking words to connect your points and explain why making a list helps you at work.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work. I write down important items like paper, pens, and rulers to make my work easier and more organized.

Gợi ý: Try to give a clear opinion and reasons. Avoid repeating words and unclear phrases. You can say why some people might not like making lists based on your opinion or experience.

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously or they find lists unnecessary.

Gợi ý: Make your answer clearer by using correct pronouns and grammar. Explain your preference with specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on paper because it is easy to carry, share with others, and make changes when needed.

× I usually don't make a list when I shop because they don't go shopping very often.

✓ I usually don't make a list when I shop because I don't go shopping very often.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrect here because the subject is 'I'. It should be 'I' to match the singular first person subject. Using 'they' causes confusion about who is being referred to.

× However, when I do shop I try to remember what I need, so don't forget anything.

✓ However, when I do shop I try to remember what I need, so I don't forget anything.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'don't forget anything'. Every clause needs a subject; omitting it causes a sentence fragment or confusion.

× I will arrange when I go to work like this, like paper, like pen, like red pen, like ruler and then something else that is very important for make my world easier and yeah, that all that all that's all.

✓ I will arrange things when I go to work like this: paper, pen, red pen, ruler, and then something else that is very important to make my work easier. And yeah, that's all.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'For make' should be 'to make'. Also, listing items should be clearer with proper punctuation. The phrase 'that all that all that's all' is redundant and corrected to 'that's all'.

× No, your your their way and like somebody else, try to work without without this and always use brand totally.

✓ No, their way is different, and some people try to work without this and always use brand names totally.

The original sentence misuses pronouns 'your your their' confusing the meaning. It should be 'their way' to refer to other people's preferences. Also, the sentence is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× I don't recognize everything about this one.

✓ I don't understand everything about this.

'Recognize' is not appropriate here; 'understand' fits better. Also, 'this one' is vague; 'this' is clearer. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper word choice.

× What I prefer I will prefer to make a list on your paper.

✓ What I prefer is to make a list on paper.

'Your paper' is incorrect because the speaker is talking about their own preference, so 'paper' without 'your' is appropriate. Also, 'I will prefer' is awkward; simple present 'I prefer' or 'What I prefer is' is better.

× It is easy to not take and easy to share to someone, easy to delete when they do something wrong, and easy to give an information to someone and clearly notice and scan.

✓ It is easy to carry, easy to share with someone, easy to delete items when I make mistakes, and easy to give information to someone clearly and to scan.

'Easy to not take' is unclear; 'easy to carry' is better. 'Share to someone' should be 'share with someone'. 'When they do something wrong' is vague; 'when I make mistakes' fits better. 'An information' is incorrect; 'information' is uncountable and does not take 'an'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct preposition use.