List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and clearer. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how making a list helps you. Try to keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily. Making a list helps me organise my purchases and ensures I don't miss anything important. Moreover, it saves me time and money by preventing unnecessary buys.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to explain why the list does not work for you and provide more specific reasons. Also, complete your sentences and avoid vague expressions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work to keep track of my tasks. However, it doesn't always work because I often write down too many things and can't finish them all. Therefore, I find that making a list sometimes causes me stress rather than helping.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use complete sentences. Explain why some people prefer not to make lists, using linking words and specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer a more flexible or spontaneous approach to their tasks. They might find lists restrictive and enjoy working in a freestyle manner without strict plans.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to complete your sentences and explain your preference clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your choice.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. It's more convenient than paper, and I can easily add or remove items whenever I want.

× So make a list helps me organize what I need to buy today.

✓ So making a list helps me organize what I need to buy today.

The verb 'make' should be in the gerund form 'making' to function as the subject of the sentence. Using the base form 'make' here is incorrect because the subject requires a noun or gerund form.

× Or is it safe time and save money?

✓ Or does it save time and save money?

The phrase 'safe time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'save time'. Also, the sentence requires the auxiliary verb 'does' to form a question in the present simple tense for third person singular.

× So make a list helps me organize what I need to buy today.

✓ So making a list helps me organize what I need to buy today.

The verb 'helps' is correctly conjugated for third person singular, but the subject 'make a list' should be 'making a list' to be grammatically correct as a subject.

× But I think it doesn't work because I jot down a lot of things for today but I cannot finish.

✓ But I think it doesn't work because I jot down a lot of things for today but I cannot finish them.

The sentence is missing the object 'them' after 'finish' to clarify what cannot be finished. Also, 'doesn't work' is correct for third person singular 'it'.

× So I think making a list for my work is not.

✓ So I think making a list for my work is not effective.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a complement after 'is not'. Adding 'effective' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Because some people don't like making this because they like freestyle style.

✓ Because some people don't like making lists because they prefer a freestyle style.

The pronoun 'this' is vague and unclear; replacing it with 'lists' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'like freestyle style' is awkward; 'prefer a freestyle style' is more appropriate.

× They don't do they like so they wanna make any tasks in the list.

✓ They don't like to do that, so they don't want to make any tasks in the list.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rephrasing it to 'They don't like to do that, so they don't want to make any tasks in the list' corrects the sentence structure and clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer to make a list on my because I usually use my always, so I don't like write something on paper because I don't like.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always use it, so I don't like writing something on paper because I don't like it.

The pronouns 'my' and 'my always' are incomplete and unclear. Adding 'phone' clarifies the object. Also, 'use my always' is incorrect; 'always use it' is correct. 'Don't like write' should be 'don't like writing'. The sentence also needs 'it' at the end for clarity.