Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, I don't. To be honest, nowadays I just shop online with some applications like Taobao, so I don't really go to the market to buy things, so I don't make a list.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
I think yes, I do make a list for my work sometimes, but not very often. I think it has a limited effective for me.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Well, as the people who doesn't like making lists for me, the main reason is that I think it takes too much effort and time for me to make a list and I'm just too lazy to follow the list.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make the list on phone. You know what, Nowadays with the development of technology, we have much more applications that can help us to make a list. For example, the notion that could not, and they are very useful.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但表达略显重复,且缺少连接词使句子流畅。建议减少重复表达,使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I mostly buy things online using apps like Taobao, so I rarely go to the market.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误('limited effective'应为'limited effect'),且表达不够具体。建议注意语法准确性,并具体说明为什么效果有限。
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes make lists for my work, but not often because I find they only help me a little in organizing my tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱,语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构,注意主谓一致,并用更具体的理由说明。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because it takes too much time and effort, and they may feel lazy to follow them.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清(如'notion that could not'),且缺少具体细节。建议纠正错误,明确应用名称,并提供具体理由。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many useful apps like Notion that help me organize tasks efficiently.
× I think it has a limited effective for me.
✓ I think it has limited effectiveness for me.
这里effective是形容词,应该用名词effectiveness来表达“效果”。此外,limited后面不需要冠词a。
× Well, as the people who doesn't like making lists for me, the main reason is that I think it takes too much effort and time for me to make a list and I'm just too lazy to follow the list.
✓ Well, as for the people who don't like making lists, the main reason is that I think it takes too much effort and time for me to make a list and I'm just too lazy to follow the list.
people是复数,谓语动词应该用don't而不是doesn't。句子中also缺少介词as for来引出话题。