List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些重复且表达不够清晰，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免语法错误。可以用更自然的表达方式来说明你不做购物清单的原因。

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I can remember what I need to buy.

Gợi ý: 回答中出现了语法错误和不自然的表达，建议用更正式和连贯的句子表达，同时避免自我评价词汇，保持客观。

Ví dụ: I don't usually make a list for my work, but I plan the structure in my mind. Sometimes I follow it, but I also like to be flexible.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，建议使用正确的语法结构，并且避免口语化的填充词，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time and prefer to remember things mentally, like me.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，建议使用完整句子并且明确表达偏好，同时避免重复。

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. When I go out, I prefer to make lists on my phone, but at school, I prefer using paper.

× No, I don't make a list when I'm sharp or when I'm shopping.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I'm shopping.

句中'sharp'用法不当，可能是想表达'shopping'，应删除'sharp'以符合语境。

× Because they might think making a list is a time wasting and unnecessary task.

✓ Because they might think making a list is a time-wasting and unnecessary task.

'time wasting'应连写为复合形容词'time-wasting'，修饰'task'，以符合英语习惯。

× MMM, they are more prefer to remember the things in mind.

✓ MMM, they prefer to remember things in their mind.

'are more prefer'结构错误，应直接用'ver'；'the things'改为'things'更自然；'in mind'前加' their'更准确。

× When I go out, I prefer making lists on my.

✓ When I go out, I prefer making lists on my phone.

句子缺少宾语，'on my'后应补充具体名词'phone'，使句子完整。