Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
When I go shopping, I make sure that I have a list in my pocket for me to be able to maximize my time in looking for the things I. Need.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list to my work. In this way I can quickly finished my work without forgetting any important things.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people don't like making lists because they think they can handle the situation and can quickly finish their work without having the least.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list in my phone because it is convenient and easy way for me to check all of my needed materials.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "for me to be able to" and fix minor grammar errors. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always carry a list in my pocket when I shop so I can save time and find everything I need quickly.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Improve grammar by saying "make a list for my work" and "quickly finish". Also, add linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me finish tasks quickly and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: The answer is unclear and has grammar mistakes. Use clearer expressions and correct phrases like "without having the least" which is incorrect. Provide more specific reasons and use linking words.
Ví dụ: Some people avoid making lists because they believe they can manage their tasks quickly without writing anything down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Improve grammar by saying "on my phone" and "an easy way". Also, add linking words and more specific reasons to make your answer more natural and effective.
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and allows me to easily check all the items I need.
× When I go shopping, I make sure that I have a list in my pocket for me to be able to maximize my time in looking for the things I. Need.
✓ When I go shopping, I make sure that I have a list in my pocket so I can maximize my time looking for the things I need.
The phrase 'in looking for' is awkward and incorrect here. The correct form is to use 'maximize my time looking for' without the preposition 'in'. Also, the period after 'I' is a typo and should be removed. This correction improves sentence flow and clarity.
× Yes, I always make a list to my work.
✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work.
The preposition 'to' is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition to use with 'make a list' related to work is 'for'. This is because the list is intended for the work, not directed to it.
× In this way I can quickly finished my work without forgetting any important things.
✓ In this way I can quickly finish my work without forgetting any important things.
The verb 'finished' is in the past tense, but the modal verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb. Therefore, 'finish' should be used instead of 'finished' after 'can'.
× Some people don't like making lists because they think they can handle the situation and can quickly finish their work without having the least.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think they can handle the situation and can quickly finish their work without having a list.
The phrase 'without having the least' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'without having a list'. 'Least' is not a correct quantifier here; 'a list' is the proper noun to use.
× I prefer to make a list in my phone because it is convenient and easy way for me to check all of my needed materials.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is a convenient and easy way for me to check all of my needed materials.
The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using a phone for lists; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'easy way' needs the article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.